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On the Ocean Waves

She smiled and squeezed his hand As he looked into her eyes Drawing her close to his side Ignoring buffeting winds The proud boat shuddered But the young lovers hardly noticed Dark clouds and lowering skies Threatened their honeymoon The captain got their attention “Dawn your lifejackets now, We’re facing rough waters!” He tried to comfort her as anxiety appeared Tension mounted, deck awash The boat leaned and shook Now, with fear showing in their faces The couple prepared to ditch Reluctantly, the vessel faltered During the intensifying storm The frightened couple escaped Clinging to an inflatable raft Seven grueling days past With no rescue ship in sight Their drinking water going fast Food containers long sense depleted “O Lord, send us food!” They prayed in desperation Suddenly a curious seagull came near Floating on the ocean waves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/9/2012 10:23:00 AM
A well deserved win for you. Congratulations James. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2012 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations James xx
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Date: 7/31/2012 12:13:00 PM
What a tragic tale !! Yet hopeful and inspirational in the end. Enjoyed your poem, I felt the fear, the tension...couldn't wait to read the next verse.
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