On the Mysterious Death of a Half-Grown Kitten

ON THE MYSTERIOUS DEATH OF A HALF-   
GROWN KITTEN

He was so beautiful, young and strong
I’d fed him just that day
Interrupted his play
Oh, he was hungry!
Cannot believe he’s gone

If he’d been sick – many days in a sorry way
On his porch bed fated to stay
His death – a blessing if quick
Oh, God, let not his death been a violent one
Not by poison, rock, or pellet gun

I’d like to think God looked down and
Found him good    too good for Earth
Too good to spill of blood

I’d like to think some angels came to Earth
And    seeing such innocence    gathered round
Took his soul to some higher region
To bless worthier folk the reason

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/30/2011 6:48:00 AM
This is a magnificent write, Daver. I have a pet male cat too.
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Date: 10/6/2011 5:00:00 PM
Yes, we can only hope this for good animals and humans alike, Daver. Some are even too good for this world!
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:25:00 PM
Such a sad poem that brought tears to my eyes, dear friend. Luckily, my cats always lived long, full lives. I hope you are right about God just finding this young kitten too good for Earth, so he sent the angels to fetch him. Beautifully written and I'm sorry this kitten's death made you sad, Daver. I do know of one killed by poison from a lady's neighbor, but children can be reckless with their rocks and B-B guns. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/1/2011 9:19:00 PM
Compassion shines through on this tender verse. The little ones are so vulnerable to the ravages of anything and I feel your soul shining through in this Daver. Luv Elizabeth
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:07:00 PM
how I would like to think if it that way as well... this is such a touching poem for that kitten--I also don't know much about karma, but let's just say that I am very glad you didn't act on those thoughts of yours, Dave :) hugs to you
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Date: 9/30/2011 7:40:00 PM
Ahhhhh, Daver! I think all dogs and cats go to heaven-just like the cartoon by Don Bluth. Nice poem to kitty. Are u a premium member? Can you post ABOUT THIS POEM...on some of your historical stuff. Just curious....a fan. ha ha.
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