Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

- On the Moon -

Thea, grandfather Alferd's dog died, she was so old and sick
Now is Thea on the moon, says Adrian who is six

Michael Jackson died so unexpectedly and abruptly
He is on the moon and plays with Thea, says Adrian who is a big fan

Betzy, grandfather Arild's dog died, she was also old and sick
Now Betzy is also on the moon with Thea and Michael Jackson and play all day

Great Grandmother died so unexpectedly and abruptly
Adrian who is six had difficulty understanding

Adrian who is six cried many tears for Great Grandmother
but comforted himself with the fact that she is sitting on the moon and
makes waffles to Thea, Michael Jackson and Betzy




04.11.2012
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Gary Wayne Hill June 8, 2013 at 1:55 PM I have five grandchildren myself (all boys) children are a constant source of inspiration for me. What comes out of the mouths of babes, wonderful stuff my friend, very much enjoyed. Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2013 at 2:15 PM -Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Gary. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi January 9, 2013 at 6:42 PM Yes..loved! what a great way to help a kid get through all this! Light & Love sunny! ;) Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2013 at 1:35 AM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Susan Clark January 5, 2013 at 1:32 PM I love this poem - I also had a dog named Lady and wrote something about enjoying my time with her - it also had the aspect of being outside at night with the moon and so forth - it is great to love your dogs so much now I have a little daucsand mix - sorry about the spelling - her name is Dizzy who I will soon write about also - God bless our petss! Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2013 at 2:49 PM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Susan. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko November 22, 2012 at 3:52 PM This is really a wonderful couplet, the mourn poem is not always brings sad facts, but it also could be a cheering one, your words in here are really uplifting, and I enjoyed them so much, they give me wisdom through my morning shade, Thank you for your lovely comment in my last page, it is really uplifting too- Hug, Yanny Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2012 at 1:22 AM Yanny, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Ira Dawson November 15, 2012 at 3:55 PM I really enjoy this one! Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2012 at 12:46 AM Ira, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Gail Debole November 12, 2012 at 3:49 PM Hi Anne Lise - Interesting look into a way a child deals with the concept of death. Love it! - Much love to you, Gail Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2012 at 3:52 PM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Gail. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath November 9, 2012 at 8:58 AM It's a wonderful poem of belief which seems to mythological one. It's not only sweet but sweet dream like. Thanks always for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2012 at 10:12 AM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments bl. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman November 8, 2012 at 8:02 PM A great poem. I've been helping my Dad while he's going thru Chemotherapy for his cancer. I don't have much time to write right now, but wanted to let you know I finished another Troll Poem called 'The Mailman Cometh'. Forever your friend... Carol Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2012 at 1:29 AM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Carol. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Elizabeth Wesley November 8, 2012 at 7:10 PM They probably are having a great time there on the moon while sooking down at us in all the mess we've made. Has a fairytale quality about it, love, Lizzie Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2012 at 1:29 AM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Elizabeth. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff November 8, 2012 at 1:05 PM Hi Anne Lise....reads like a heart-wrenching beautiful dream......with a couple "6 yr. old abbreviated speech" moments....nice effect....also, just in general, seems i got that "anguish-pain" feeling that comes just before tears....but didn't cry, maybe cuz your story keeps touching on the comfort of loved ones around after life on this surface......best, jimbo Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2012 at 1:17 PM Adrian cry no more, they are well on the moon jimbo - - - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison November 7, 2012 at 2:53 PM This is so delightful my dear sweet Miss Norway! Loved it and loved the last line!Big big hugs, Jack xxx Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2012 at 2:57 PM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Jack. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley November 7, 2012 at 10:21 AM So sad,and sweet...A beauiful write my friend. :o) f.e.f oxox <3 Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2012 at 10:35 AM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Dan. - oxox love and f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop November 7, 2012 at 8:10 AM Its so hard to explain to young innocent chidren about loss,especially loss of loved ones..But sweet Adrian seems to be very smart and understanding dear.Touched my heart and soul..Charma Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2012 at 10:34 AM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Charma. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway November 7, 2012 at 6:25 AM nice poem friend Anne Lise..I really like it..You make me smile before I sleep...thanks for sharing and for all your support on my poems.. hugs and kisses from me :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2012 at 6:43 AM Maria, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 7, 2012 at 5:47 AM how is the moon glow over there, anne?... sweet autumn hello to you!..:) huggs always Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2012 at 6:42 AM Nette, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Fisayo Aderounmu November 7, 2012 at 4:14 AM Passionately penned,Anne i just enjoyed this. Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2012 at 4:17 AM - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Fisayo. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin November 6, 2012 at 4:58 PM A charming poem of love and feelings. I like the way the story is told. Thanks for your lavish praise of my Taka Time's Termite, Anne! You are so kind. God Bless You! -Mohammad Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2012 at 3:21 AM - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Mohammad. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 6, 2012 at 9:00 AM A LOVELY VISION OF SWEETNESSENJOYING THE MOON'S COMFORT ANNE-LISE .. WRITTEN IN A DELICATE TONE LUV .. BEEN HAVING SO MUCH TROUBLE TRYING TO COMMENT BACK TO POETS WHO KINDLY READ MY WORDS .. DON'T KNOW WHY TPS CANNOT FIX FOR ME ..OH .. Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2012 at 10:20 AM - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Linda-Marie. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Cayton November 6, 2012 at 8:20 AM Nice poetry, enjoyed it. Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2012 at 10:19 AM - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Cindy. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Hazel Connelly November 6, 2012 at 4:24 AM How lovely and sweet Anne-Lise. Very touching.. Thank you for commenting on my poetry.. :-) Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2012 at 10:18 AM - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Hazel. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Laura Breidenthal November 6, 2012 at 3:08 AM Aww. Very touching . great one! aS USUAL! Always, Laura Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2012 at 3:11 AM - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Laura. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams November 5, 2012 at 6:41 PM my son lost his father at that age...a hard age to grasp death and its meaning, you capture it beautifully in this piece...good poem :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2012 at 2:27 AM So sad,Sandra. - - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins November 5, 2012 at 4:29 PM Anne Lise - You touch my heart in its softest place with this one. Making waffles is wonderful. What a picture of heaven! love, Kathy Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2012 at 2:26 AM - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Kathryn. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 5, 2012 at 3:55 PM how stunnkig this is , anne... locley story and great [acig!... happy day with love and hugggs!..: Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2012 at 2:25 AM - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Nette. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2012 at 3:38 PM this is very imaginative and sweet!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2012 at 2:25 AM - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Andrea. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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