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On the Far Side of Here

I kept it treading air, constrained, as if it were held tied to a grip, clenched for fear of letting go and give to wings a fluttering freedom, an elsewhere beyond the mind's persistent stare and the anchored weight of being. I would like to launch and let it rise into fenceless air, to fly unhindered, a blur of colour keeping just within my reach until it lifts away to where the slightest breath sends it aimless, adrift on a gentle wind, to settle a dreaming soul - somewhere - on the far side of here.

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Date: 4/4/2023 11:45:00 PM
So beautiful - I think reading your poems in chronological order was a good move as there is scene setting from previous poems as your mind moves forward. For me I interpret this poem as a "who am I and what am I doing here" call out into the ether. I question the sensible version of myself which does all the stuff like professional job etc and can't reconcile it to a version of me say running off to join the circus, except I don't want to join the circus. There's an unformed longing maybe
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/5/2023 1:52:00 PM
Pleased that the words found a receptive ear. You have put in a marathon effort in reading my poems. So grateful for the time and brain space used up in the task. As this poem concludes, glad that it has found a fellow dreaming soul. Take care

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