On Seeing "the Painted Veil" Three Times

"Lift not the painted veil which those who live/
   Call Life"   --Shelley   
   
"Sometimes the greatest journey is the distance
      between two people"   --Movie trailer

W. Somerset 
set the bar for lasting love, 
and then-some: 
giving us a heroine, 
winsome, but dumb-some, 
who couldn't decide if lover or 
husband was the true-one
until the day of compromise
when death arrived with final say 
on which was the who-one.
Our misled mistress 
could have lied, 
not told the truth who sired 
her un-born, sent her husband 
less torn to die upon the path
to "ghostly" but that would 
have been so mostly 
un-Maugham-like. Yet, why 
does Monet's stormy beach at 
Etretat, Michelangelo's sensual 
David, or this particular piece 
of celluloid stir the heart?  
You see yourself, your life 
as Reality, copying Art.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/18/2009 2:28:00 PM
Nola, I sent you an email, but it didn't go through for some reason. My email address is davidraustin@charter.net. I don't care who knows it, but I won't divulge yours to anyone. Please write me and let me know if I have the right email address for you. Love your poetry BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 3/18/2009 8:44:00 AM
I haven't seen the picture, Nola....sounds like the age old triagle story with revenge. After I catch it on H.B.O. I'll write some more. Love, daver
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Date: 3/14/2009 7:26:00 PM
I must not put it off any longer....this is a must see movie...it will be on my most wanted list. This poem, so incredible, has really awaken an interest...I agree...you have such a gift of unusual, interesting, and unique poetry...Wonderfully written!
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Date: 3/14/2009 1:35:00 PM
You and Stacey have me wanting to see this. I love soul-reaching movies.:) And my God, you can write. Best wishes, Sara:)
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Date: 3/8/2009 4:49:00 PM
Most excellent gatchy, playful, I enjoyed the placement and repetition of the word "some" I have a good quote for you in the same vein. "Only bastards and cream rise, George" from the movie Cool Hand Luke with the late Paul Newman. Light & Love
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