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On Seeing a Photograph-2

On seeing a photograph “Our task is to listen to the news that is always arriving out of silence” - Rainer Maria Rilke - A rare prologue gone awry Drafted as it was in the midst of A terrible denouement Plain and bare for once, shorn of frills Exposed to all the evil And in a fluster Here it was left incarcerated Within the burden of unkind words Craving care Words that just couldn’t tell That wouldn’t at all hear Nor be fair Moments before getting erased By the most blasted hand that ever Pulled a trigger Into Silence. And here I stand listening to the news That’s always arriving out of Silence.. S.Jagathsimhan Nair 8 May 13 • On seeing the photograph of Balachandran, son of Tiger Prabhakaran, moments before the 12 year old was killed. For Kim Morrison's

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Date: 7/6/2013 4:15:00 AM
attention getting poetry, yet so endearing. Jag, you have mastered the art of crafting a tribute. Extremely touching, my friend.....and Congrats.... Jake
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Date: 7/2/2013 3:40:00 PM
Wow perfection here! WOW double WOW 7 & fav Light & Love
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Date: 5/30/2013 9:50:00 PM
Jag, Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 5/29/2013 4:20:00 PM
Very nice piece! Thanks for submitting it to my contest. Kim I somehow missed you when I was doing comments on the entries yesterday.
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:55:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest. take care cory
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Date: 5/18/2013 11:52:00 AM
oh my gosh... I can't believe I have not seen the winners in this contest.. I try not to miss the support all the contest around here need... your poem is sad... the incident... Congratulations... LINDA
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Date: 5/10/2013 4:54:00 PM
well you placed in an appropriate contest - 'impressed' - because it is a very impressive poem jaggy, your writing just goes from strength to strength...congrats sweetie, so proud of you :)
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Date: 5/10/2013 1:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/10/2013 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win, my friend. Good poetry. Licia :-)
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Date: 5/9/2013 11:05:00 PM
Jag, thank you for impressing me with your awesome poem. Congrats ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/9/2013 8:01:00 AM
Truly a sad tale. I bow to your eloquence, my friend. :-)
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Date: 5/9/2013 1:52:00 AM
a gripping piece, jag, made more distinct through your searing yet beautifully implied laguage... great stuff!...:) hugggs
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Date: 5/7/2013 10:09:00 PM
Yes Jag..senseless evil...all around...thanks for sharing your poem...
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