Keith O.J. Hunt Poet Rhyme

On Rode the Valiant

Through the gates of Absalom,
steed and gate did ride,
charging fast and furious
o'er centuries gone by;
peace did shout in vain,
the Lidless Prophets...
must come again,
nigh is the evening sky
but full of hope

The ramparts held fast, ballast and beam,
cannon-fire bombasting flesh and bone,
groans of death ---
such dreary breath!
of decay centuries old

The Rose of all that is Earth,
her petals unsheathed,
torn for time ---
tear and antiquity ---
her red sheen lilts in the new day sun,
begging for Love, she asks:

Shall they come?

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John Hamilton August 1, 2017 at 9:41 PM Really class writing Keith, you have a singular voice here in the soup, matchless really, a unique style, wow singular matchless and unique, I guess repetition for emphasis, this is a beauty of a read. Keith O.J. Hunt August 2, 2017 at 11:22 AM A telling thing to say John, I did not know my place here in all its mystery, but am glad that I fulfill some valued role on the Soup. I'm often told I'm a skilled writer, which is praise enough, but I have always been a scholar which is my foundation; poetry is my perfect expression in this regard. I'm glad you found a flower or two in this write!:-)

Gary Bateman July 31, 2017 at 7:37 AM Hello Keith, A magnificent rhyme here for sure, AND A FAVE TOO!! I noticed in the note from John Fleming the word exchange concerning Tennyson, Pound, Thomas, as well as Shelley, Bryon, and Keats. All of these greats, of course, are true music to my ears too since I consider myself to be a traditionalist concerning the poetic art. Some others I would certainly include, of course, are: T.S. Eliot, Poe, William Carlos William, Roethke, and so on. All good stuff. Cheers and Best, Gary Keith O.J. Hunt August 2, 2017 at 11:12 AM Glad you enjoyed this one Gary, one of my more unique writes I think, I honestly did not know what others would think of it, yet submitted it for its obvious merits. I do appreciate the comparisons to the great list of poets, I have many of their works in my library. God bless:-)

Nette Onclaud July 23, 2017 at 10:13 AM impressed by the flow of your word choices done in a semi-abstract form, keith... lovely, thought-provoking piece...huggs Keith O.J. Hunt July 23, 2017 at 10:50 AM Many thanks nette! Always appreciate your cutting-edge commenta! God bless sister :-)

John Fleming July 22, 2017 at 5:51 PM Very impressive, Keith! I have tried to liken the style of writing to that of another poet...but, in all honesty, have failed to do so; maybe a mix of Tennyson, Pound, and Dylan Thomas? Your excellent poem really is quite unique! My very best regards. :) john P.s I really did enjoy the read. Keith O.J. Hunt July 23, 2017 at 10:48 AM Thanks John, quite the honor! 3 great poets but Tennyson is more likened to me apparently. Shelley, Byron and Keats are often compared to me the most, which is a major compliment.Thanks for your kind visit brother!

Harry Horsman July 18, 2017 at 5:47 AM Awesome poetry, love the feel of the words.. Keith O.J. Hunt July 18, 2017 at 9:33 PM Thanks harry, it does have a unique seamless weave:-)

Robert Lindley July 17, 2017 at 10:44 PM YOU HAVE DONE IT AGAIN, set my mind ablaze with such incredible verses my friend! Every verse a gem.. a fav Keith O.J. Hunt July 18, 2017 at 9:32 PM Thanks Robert, this is an older write which I always liked; it has a fundamental message, I think, glad you enjoyed brother:-)

Aurore Severo July 17, 2017 at 12:32 AM This reminds me of ancient times, xoxoxo peace and love. Keith O.J. Hunt July 17, 2017 at 11:55 AM Glad you enjoyed Aurore, I do enjoy the classic style:-)

Akkina Downing July 16, 2017 at 8:25 PM The Rose of all that is Earth... but of course I like it :) Keith O.J. Hunt July 17, 2017 at 11:53 AM Thanks for your lovely visit Akkina! :-)

Silent One July 16, 2017 at 12:37 PM I do like your style of writing. Well written Keith. Keith O.J. Hunt July 16, 2017 at 10:04 PM I appreciate the visit brother:-)

Dale Gregory Cozart July 16, 2017 at 12:07 PM Beautiful. Keith O.J. Hunt July 16, 2017 at 10:04 PM Thanks Dale:-)