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On Rigid Heel

You are the smokey love for which I bleed 
Between heart's stuttered flutter I begin 
To measure fertile 'core survivor' need 
When gone to spawn the spectral-dawn of sin. 

Pretension eats a little dignity 
Then leaves me like a leper on the road, 
Left begging for charades called charity 
To gain an extra hand to lift a load 

Or just a tear from eyes that coldly stare 
Where soul and body disappear from view 
As I look up, a penitent in prayer, 
One last and final time, I will see you 

Turn round with twisted face on rigid heel; 
Again, you never see the things I feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/23/2011 4:05:00 PM
Hi Tom, enjoying the natural flare you have for the rhyme. Keep up the great writing.
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