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My mistakes were of the human kind. Was told to hold my tongue but was disinclined. From a flight of winding stairs I fell through my mind. knavish condescension rendered my sight blind. In my guilt filled chasm I was confined. Bloody fingertips on my canvas scrape and grind. Self inflicted condemnations unwind. I’m entering the interstate of forgiveness that He designed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/9/2010 7:48:00 AM
Fabulous Robb.. an entry that will surely grace the top of the winners list my friend.. agree with all the lines especially the last one luv..
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:39:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry today Robb. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2010 10:14:00 AM
You pine and repine! You have tapped into the ever-flowing stream of forgiveness! Your poem is a shallow reservoir of deep thoughts. I enjoyed your rhyme scheme and concise verse! Look forward to reading more of your poetry in the near future! Steve
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