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On Public Criticism

Pitiful is the poor soul who finds no peace Focusing on the foibles of a fellow poet Who finds no fit subject to occupy her mind, Has not learned the meaning of “Stow it!” The poet she criticizes is expressing himself In the only way he knows how to write, ‘Tis best she read his words without retort Keep thoughts to herself, not stir up a fight. The poet didn’t even have her in his mind When he wrote words expressing his hurt He was, perhaps, angry with his daughter For being a careless, reckless insidious flirt Some poems are written to express feelings While some poems are completely fictitious But public criticism written in a comment Can turn ugly, especially when it’s vicious.
Written March 28, 2022 [on reading an unpleasant criticism of a poet’s work]

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Date: 3/29/2022 8:49:00 AM
I am glad that I missed this!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/29/2022 9:04:00 AM
Actually, I stumbled upon it. Then, I thought about it, and I decided to write this poem. I can't even remember who or what now, but I remember the tone of the criticism. Not good for Poetry Soup...or anyone, for that matter.
Date: 3/29/2022 5:30:00 AM
Milton, in the world of work I was taught, or learned the hard way, "criticize in private, praise in public"
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/29/2022 8:11:00 AM
Absolutely. Very good advice which we all should pay attention to. I agree wholeheartedly.
Date: 3/29/2022 4:32:00 AM
Hi Milt, not sure who's being unkind but it makes no sense to be mean. Just be happy and love, that makes for a much better day! Happy Tuesday!!!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/29/2022 8:13:00 AM
Absolutely, Mike. Thanks for your affirmative comment. I don't think Poetry Soup should be used as an outlet for meanness. Happy Tuesday to you, too!
Date: 3/29/2022 3:58:00 AM
Is she at it again, Milt? Or should I say, is she still at it? Her negativity must be a burden for her to carry for her venom will poison her.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/29/2022 8:16:00 AM
(chuckling) Actually, Jenna, this poem had nothing to do with her. I read a rather caustic criticism on someone's poem several days ago and it festered, so I wrote this poem. Unfortunately, though she IS still at it. She wrote one just yesterday, I believe, but I'm simply ignoring her. I can't let myself get too involved with her negativity. I find her tenacity astonishing, on the other hand! Thanks, Jenna.
Date: 3/29/2022 2:29:00 AM
I love this poem. The idea that we must never criticize other poems will not help to produce good poems. Frankly I feel I have lost my muse.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/29/2022 8:19:00 AM
Aw, hang in there, Victor, and I'm sure she will return when you least expect it. Once a writer, always a writer!

Book: Shattered Sighs