On Our Streets

through the mist
vision blurred by the bias of our views
intelligently present our clouded vision
never attempting to walk in another men's shoes.

blinded by the fog inhabits our thoughts
signs in hand we offer our misted words.
convinced we are right 
our dissenters lost
so we draw chalky lines 
dare others to cross.

the air thick as stew our opinions attempt to dice
destroy the filmy feels of those on another side
war is declared
battles commence

with our guns blowing smoke,
our swords red hot metal forged
and still wrapped in the rising haze of heat.
our voices raised 
yell through the dirty streets.

nowhere in sight a space of clear rationale
take the time to hear or see through this toxic mist
not a chance my friend
my eyes blurry with tears
the gas they release 
the inner pain that i feel

through the mist 
no one hears 
everyone deaf
this our reality 
when ideas 
supersede our fellow beings
through the mist i see no love
hate covered and guised as ideas
oh if they could see through the mist
that is us on both sides of the street.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/24/2014 12:53:00 PM
This is an excellent write my dear friend Maurice! You did it very well! Why are you not entering it in a contest? You are a great poet and writer my dear! Thank you so much for sharing! I will come back to read more ok. May I also take this opportunity to thank you (belated thanks) for reading and your nice comments on my poem. I appreciated it so much. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 8/24/2014 4:20:00 PM
thank you. i took your advice and i rewrote this piece to qualify for the contest. i also changed the title. again thank you for your help. lots of love.
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