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On One Knee

if you wanted to dance with me
i mean really wanted to dance with me
then i would
i would dance with you

if you needed me to walk on water
i would stand there until the lake froze
then i would
i would walk on water for you

if you suggested i climb 
a mountain 
warm at the bottom
freezing at the peak 
i'd buy you a snow globe
turn it upside down and up
hold your hand warm 
watch the freezing snowfall
climb your suggestion creatively

if you mentioned 
you'd like me to paint your portrait 
i'd buy every different colour of acrylic paint I could find
blend them on a canvas
paint your colourful internal portrait
every crayon in the box 
that's who i see

if you said move me
i wouldn't hire a truck
or even touch one stick of furniture
i would write this poem for you
put a bow on it
fingers crossed 
i would move you

your lips are always on my mind

if you want a man
willing to do...
...a man...
...hold you gentle but firm

i'm here 

ring in hand 
on one knee

November 28 2016
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Sambourne Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 9:11 PM
What a superbly romantic write. Love it! You are a very creative poet Maurice. Your words teach us. Best wishes, Brian
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 5:07 AM
I am thinking about you Armand and missing your beautiful words. I hope you are well my friend? Blessings, Connie
Chircop Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Oh you are a real gentleman who knows what a woman wants, and this is a real poem full of beauty and romance.I hope She'll take her chance.
Teagan Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 6:06 AM
I have goosebumps right now lol Wow... this is soooooooo beautiful, Armand. You have such an amazing way with words... truly a gift.
Raven Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 2:57 PM
Hi Armand, another excellent write from your hand. One reads spellbound from the first word to the last. So simple the words flow and yet so strong the feelings they show upon the page. Once again your write does make me feel peace but also love, love for my own lady. You hold your readers imagination from beginning to the end of each peace you write. This piece is such a gentle slice of love my friend. This has to be a seven and a fave. Your Friend always....Mike.
Ricci Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:03 AM
Good Morning Maurice. Have a seat please and let me ramble for a moment. My goodness. I love love love this. As someone who believes in love and believes in romance entries to be shared by two special people this entry is beyond beautiful and marvelous. I see perfection in every way. All poetic elements are attached including the emotive factor which shines. The feeling and emotion are executed marvelously. I can go on but I will spare you. Well done completely and entirely. Excellent. PS perfect with the title also.
Manassian Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 11:50 PM
What an ending, Maurice....delicious. I loved the stanza about holding gently...but firmly...it's a wonderful man who can do both. Loved this piece. Thanks for your recent visits to my work and your words of comfort on the passing away of my Uncle. It was much appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 7:49 AM
How sweet and unusually different and romantic! Well done Armand.
Williams Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 4:26 AM
Wow , how beautiful Armand, what words , what a voice. I am truly impressed. Are you an actor? A Super 7++
Austin Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 12:33 PM
What woman could say no to such a wonderful proposal? Your work is always so rewarding to read - such an imagination, such a spinner of words. Love, daver
Bateson Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 2:22 PM
Beautiful and sweet
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 6:00 AM
You're so romantic. Your poem, with its simple language and imagery, may move the woman in your mind.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 5:45 AM
OMG this is good!...I was certainly moved! You know how to capture a woman's heart Armand. Bless you..Connie
Callus Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 11:05 AM
The uniqueness of a proposal to which there could be no negative answer! You are a romantic at heart, Armand! Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Now I thats a proposal!
A   Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 10:34 AM
A touching write my friend, sweet as can be. A super Fav for me. A top 10 write.... LOVE LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 8:07 PM
and oodles and oodles of Happy Birthdays with a big bow on top!
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 8:06 PM
SO SWEET, ARmand!! Gosh, I did not even get a proposal at all from my hubbie. WE just "fell into marriage" so wow, if a guy had proposed this way to me in my youth, I would have melted like jello!! Favaroo!!
Y. Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Hi Armand, I came by to wish you a HAPPY BIRTHDAY. May all your wishes and dreams come true. WoW! That was some proposal. It was so beautiful and romantic. The imagery was lovely. Thanks for the cyber gift :-) Alexis
B. Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 12:59 PM
Armand, I wanted to wish you a Happy Birthday! I hope you have an amazing day :) This is such a beautiful proposal poem. It melts the heart and is so romantic and loving. Oh and a big thank you for cyber monday lol :) That's one hell of a gift for all of us here at Poetry Soup.
Chircop Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 12:49 PM
How adorable and wonderful this proposal. Happy Birthday my good friend Armand.May God bless your heart with happiness.A fave. And A 7
Allison Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 11:56 AM
WOW what a wonderful romantic poem and what a proposal Armand. Have a wonderful birthday my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Turner Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Happy birthday Armand:)
Flats Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Wow! My birthdays only inspire longer naps. Happy birthday sir and three wowsas on your magnetic proposal!
Smith Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Happy Birthday Armand :)
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