On My Threadbare Love

My love is like a worker's gloves grown old.
His hands are leather, roughened now with age
and years of work in weather hot and cold,
yet through the many years, he has grown sage. . .

My love is like a builder's pair of boots.
He's dusty and fatigued and still he walks
while trailing mud, but now his attributes
shine through despite life's many stumbling blocks.

My love is like a pair of jeans much worn,
a pair of socks with holes that have stayed warm.
Though time and all the trials he has borne
have left him frayed, he wishes no one harm.

To write a beaming sonnet would not do,
but threadbare love (in some ways) bests the new.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Watt Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 9:08 PM
Andrea, a delightful paean to hard work, commitment, long-lasting love, and a hardy, kind soul. Well done, friend
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Sweet, Andrea. Well done.
Johnston Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 6:09 PM
And what more's left for me to say Than folks more wise that I have said, But this poor sonnet warms the heart And sings old praise against the day When all of us have played our part, Gives seniors hope for what's ahead.
Ebbs Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Nicely written Andrea, congrats on your win :)
Kayode Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 1:28 AM
Everyone at different time will come of age,we should just pop our corns while we still have teeth in our mouths,it is of no use popping corns when the teeth have gone...thank God for everything Andrea...congrats on your well deserved win..hugs
Tor Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Andrea nice win nice love poem!
A  Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 12:24 AM
Andrea:) Congratulations on your placement. ThanXs for supporting my contest. <3 Love SKAT
Nehls Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 6:43 AM
Wonderful sonnet, Andrea. What a great way to speak of an enduring love...... Robert.
May Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 8:44 PM
I love the analogy...it shows the eternal strength of love...thank you so much for stopping by ...hugs
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April 21, 2013 at 4:44 PM
An affectionate and honest sounding appraisal. A really gentle and lovely piece of writing. - Red
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July 31, 2012 at 11:21 PM
ANDREA, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD
Flanagan Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 7:52 PM
It flows so beautifully! Very nice!~Tammy~
Austin Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 9:46 AM
Threadbare is perfect. What a great description. 2010? Oh, what promise this poet shows. Wow! Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Nguyen Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 3:19 AM
Nice...I'm jealous!--Ngoc
Roberts Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 8:57 PM
such a touching sonnet, congrats on having it featured this week Andrea
Poet Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 6:33 AM
One of your best sonnets here!!
Amadore Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations...an interesting, heartfelt sonnet!
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 8:04 PM
congrats andie on making it to the first round of TPS contest..wow! just read your email; i have 7,000 unread messages iin my inbox; darn asthma... repying soon as my internet slowed down for half a day! :) huggs
Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 5:39 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest X 2. Wishing you the best in the finals Andrea. Love, Carol
Datta Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 1:10 AM
This makes one fall in love with the poet, helplessly. But she is full with her old love. Lovely!
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December 29, 2011 at 8:31 AM
CONGRATULATIONS Andrea!This is my 5th comment at this poem.Look bellow and you will find.A fav on my first comment.
Osita Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 2:31 AM
What a poem with intense usage of simile... It is excellent and very well written. Congratulations for making it to the final round. MERRY CHRISTMAS, ANDREA
Agtani Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 12:21 AM
Awesome sonnet Andrea. This piece made it through to the "cream of the cake" . I wish you luck my dear. Dalila
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December 28, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Very original and heartfelt use of simile in this great sonnet, dear Andrea. Congratulations on your poems going to the finals. Have a Happy New Year full of health and love..., and $$$, and smiles :)
K. Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 10:04 PM
Super yay for one of your sonnets going through, sweetie ^_^! This one's a beauty!
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