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On My New Car, A Scar

I was teaching my younger sister to drive using Mom's car, slowly, slowly back up, I said- it was then we hit with a jar ! _______________________ November 19, 2021 Poetry/Couplet/On My New Car, A Scar Copyright Protected, ID 11-1408-386-19 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Your Funniest Couplet Ever Sponsor, L. MILTON HANKINS, NA, Judged 12/05/2021

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Date: 12/1/2021 10:13:00 PM
No car will be without a scar, if it is taken out for teaching driving ! When a new car gets a scar, it leaves a scar in the owner's mind.... ! Sad Constance !
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Date: 12/2/2021 9:02:00 AM
Valsa, oh so true that scar has lasted for years .. thanks for visiting and commenting ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/20/2021 9:44:00 AM
Hi Constance, This is a good entry for the contest. I remember driving lessons, I still haven't got the hang of it yet lol! Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and happy holidays to you:-)Alexis
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Date: 11/20/2021 11:57:00 AM
Alexis, thanks for the compliment, it is hard for me to come up with a funny poem because well I serious writer but in real life this was really funny because in demonstrating how to back up I backed up into my own new car ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/19/2021 10:16:00 AM
First rule: Don't mar the car! Then ask her to explain why a package onboard ship is called cargo, but delivered by car is a "shipment"?
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Date: 11/20/2021 11:58:00 AM
Rico thanks for visit, love your sense of humour ~ peace and tranquility _Constance