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My life, at times, seems not my own My shoes feel two sizes too small This body you see I have it on loan My back is straight I'm standing tall Till that time when my rental is up On those days when my skin feels too tight I'll remember how full is my cup And my determination to not give up this fight 11/11/19 Give Me 8 Lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Date: 11/13/2019 6:16:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Heather. Well done.
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Date: 11/13/2019 5:11:00 AM
Heather, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest with your excellently penned poem, enjoyed!
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Date: 11/12/2019 2:16:00 PM
Great work Heather. A really clever concept!! Well done..Ron x
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Date: 11/12/2019 1:21:00 AM
"when my rental is up" - this made me smile because of the sheer truth in it!
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Heather Crismond
Date: 11/13/2019 3:39:00 PM
Thank you ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it
Date: 11/12/2019 12:16:00 AM
##This body you see I have it on loan## Beautiful thoughts..Congrats..
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Heather Crismond
Date: 11/13/2019 3:38:00 PM
Thank you so much!!