Heather Crismond Poet Rhyme

On Loan

My life, at times, seems not my own
My shoes feel two sizes too small
This body you see I have it on loan
My back is straight I'm standing tall

Till that time when my rental is up
On those days when my skin feels too tight
I'll remember how full is my cup
And my determination to not give up this fight

11/11/19
Give Me 8 Lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Line Gauthier November 13, 2019 at 6:16 AM Congrats on your win, Heather. Well done.

Tania Kitchin November 13, 2019 at 5:11 AM Heather, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest with your excellently penned poem, enjoyed!

Ronald D Thompson November 12, 2019 at 2:16 PM Great work Heather. A really clever concept!! Well done..Ron x

Caren Krutsinger November 12, 2019 at 1:21 AM "when my rental is up" - this made me smile because of the sheer truth in it! Heather Crismond November 13, 2019 at 3:39 PM Thank you ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it

Jenish Somadas November 12, 2019 at 12:16 AM ##This body you see I have it on loan## Beautiful thoughts..Congrats.. Heather Crismond November 13, 2019 at 3:38 PM Thank you so much!!