On Her Way Down

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AP: 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:53 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
Gauthier Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:06 PM
lol ~ thanks, Beata
Watt Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 10:20 PM
I always enjoy your shape poems, Line. This one is adorable and so clever. Congrats on your win ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:06 PM
Thank you very much, John ~
George   Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:58 PM
So cute! Many congrats on your win, dear Line. ~ Elaine
Gauthier Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:06 PM
Thanks, Elaine. Most appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:37 PM
so CUTE and fun, Line. Loved it. Congrats on the win.
Gauthier Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:06 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 11:58 AM
Got a chuckle...Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 4:42 PM
Thanks, Sara. Much appreciated ~
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 11:30 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Line :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 4:42 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated ~
Blodgett Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:00 AM
So cute and clever Line. It tickled my thinking! Lonna
Gauthier Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 4:42 PM
Thank you very much, Lonna. LOL
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:16 AM
adorable... congratulations on your win! hugs
Gauthier Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated ~
Mcguire Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 7:04 PM
what you are doing is word sculpture visually and mentally....Great
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 8:53 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 2:40 PM
This is whimsical and adorable Line!
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Adams Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 3:25 PM
i fear spiders....this one is cute however :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 3:38 PM
This one won't bite. LOL
One Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 1:46 PM
This is very clever..
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Thanks, SO. Much appreciated.
Poetry Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Nice, very creative
Gauthier Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 11:29 AM
Thanks, TS. Much appreciated.
Na Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Hi Line. we had a Brown Recluse on the wall yesterday. Remembering what they can do to your body I left it alone. Thanks for sharing this
Gauthier Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 11:28 AM
what are the odds?!...that was a good move on your part, Gregory.
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