On Her Way Down

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AP: 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on November 17, 2019

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Date: 11/30/2020 12:53:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 11/30/2020 2:06:00 PM
lol ~ thanks, Beata
Date: 11/29/2020 10:20:00 PM
I always enjoy your shape poems, Line. This one is adorable and so clever. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/30/2020 2:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, John ~
Date: 11/29/2020 8:58:00 PM
So cute! Many congrats on your win, dear Line. ~ Elaine
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/30/2020 2:06:00 PM
Thanks, Elaine. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/29/2020 6:37:00 PM
so CUTE and fun, Line. Loved it. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 11/30/2020 2:06:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/29/2020 11:58:00 AM
Got a chuckle...Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. Sara
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. Much appreciated ~
Date: 11/29/2020 11:30:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Line :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated ~
Date: 11/29/2020 8:00:00 AM
So cute and clever Line. It tickled my thinking! Lonna
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lonna. LOL
Date: 11/29/2020 5:16:00 AM
adorable... congratulations on your win! hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2020 6:26:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated ~
Date: 11/18/2019 7:04:00 PM
what you are doing is word sculpture visually and mentally....Great
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 8:53:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 11/18/2019 2:40:00 PM
This is whimsical and adorable Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 3:38:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/17/2019 3:25:00 PM
i fear spiders....this one is cute however :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 3:38:00 PM
This one won't bite. LOL
Date: 11/17/2019 1:46:00 PM
This is very clever..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 3:38:00 PM
Thanks, SO. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/17/2019 11:20:00 AM
Nice, very creative
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2019 11:29:00 AM
Thanks, TS. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/17/2019 11:08:00 AM
Hi Line. we had a Brown Recluse on the wall yesterday. Remembering what they can do to your body I left it alone. Thanks for sharing this
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2019 11:28:00 AM
what are the odds?!...that was a good move on your part, Gregory.
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