On Halloween Night - Hell's Gate

On Halloween Night - Hell’s Gate
Hell’s Gate, a misshapen, naturally occurring stone arch, Towering over a smelly stagnant stream, Scary, eerie, and darkly foreboding; Not so inviting, crawling with creepy ghostly trees That sprouted twisted thorns resembling the Devil’s crown; And the stench of death hovered in the stale air.
Feared by the village folks, Hell’s Gate was known To be home to many unholy creatures, and tales abound About four-fingered duendes, with feet turned backwards, Chupacabras that sucked the life's blood from animals, Venomous two-headed albino vipers, and even La Llorona, The Weeping Lady, who spirited children away to a watery grave.
Only the very brave dared to venture near Hell’s Gate. Adults would not go there even in broad daylight, Children quivered and hid under thick covers in their beds; Especially on Halloween night when evil spirits roamed about, And the mouth of Hell’s Gate was open wide - Waiting to trap unsuspecting souls.
Notes: Duendes are fairy or goblin-like creatures that lack thumbs. They can be crafty and evil.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/15/2014 11:56:00 AM
I think I've been there. Excellent write
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/16/2014 2:33:00 PM
Hi Christopher, that's a great compliment! LOL! I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you very much for visiting! Kika
Date: 9/13/2014 9:58:00 PM
Hi Kika, oh this is quite scary - I love your take on the theme - very different and very creative! Well done!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/16/2014 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita, I am happy that you enjoyed it! Regards. Kika
Date: 9/10/2014 2:13:00 PM
I must've been there in a dream because I've seen the, "four-fingered duendes, with feet turned backwards," and they were terrifying. When I awoke, my heart was beating so fast and hard that it was literally shaking the bed. Scary poem, indeed.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/12/2014 2:58:00 PM
Heheheh! I am glad you enjoyed my scary little piece. Thank you so much dear! Best regards. Kika
Date: 9/8/2014 7:56:00 AM
Now this sounds like the real deal ! As a Buffy fan, as they depicted Hell's Gate always seemed a little campy, but you nailed it, Kika !
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/9/2014 7:20:00 PM
Hey Keith, I love your comment! Made my day! Thank you so much! Kika
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