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On Giving Up

On Giving Up! "Never quit" said she,"when people to your poetry, languish in disdain or complacency! "e.e. Cummings never wrote for the fancy of the love of the crowd!" She made me some tea with fresh lemon, And wiped my tears away. She bade me to read some poetry so utterly ridiculous! And reminded me to be very clear and meticulous. Said she, "Poetry is not throwing any words at all on a wall, And like a fool hoping they stick," that will be your downfall!" "You are new to this art, silly woman, you." "Being smart and cute, may get you some laughs," "But it will take a few years to develop that  true, fine, poet heart in you" I surmised she was right, when all is said and done, and bid her farewell. I thanked God humbly, for this woman! I put down my pen, and strolled happily, Bathed in the warmth of this God given Spring and the California sun. Panagiota Romios 4/16/2019

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Date: 4/16/2019 9:19:00 PM
Some times you have to put down your quill and go out and sell the flowers. Great read. So true. Stay frosty my friend.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/16/2019 9:26:00 PM
Great advice. I get it!! I like the idea of a quill Frosty the Snowman, aka Panagiota
Date: 4/16/2019 8:26:00 PM
Gosh, this is wonderful. A real treasure of a poem! A FAVE for me, and a 'chance encounter of the (intensely) meaningful kind! :) gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/16/2019 8:38:00 PM
Gershon, a FAV is like an Academy Award to me only byway better It's a true blessing, too. You also have such a unique sense of humor. Gratefully~Panagiota

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