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On Garden Earth - Hc

where three roses bloom
and two roses lie wilting . . . 
one bud starts to peek

For every three souls blossoming are two that have seen their last days.
Always at least there is one that has yet on the world to gaze.

Feb. 26, 2019 for charles messina's 'Charliekucoup' Poetry Contest

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/6/2019 10:30:00 PM The roses tell a story! Congrats! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/7/2019 1:32:00 PM Back with congratulations on your win ... Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 3/7/2019 7:30:00 AM A life cycle, beautifully presented, Andrea. Congratulations on your deserved win. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2019 4:41:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Andrea :) - Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/6/2019 5:20:00 PM Dropping back with my Congrats Andrea.. Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 3/6/2019 2:10:00 PM Wonderful, Andrea. excellent take on the contest. Congratulations on your win...Charlie :) Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/2/2019 6:25:00 PM Lovely metaphor of life, sounds like you are a gardener! Best of luck in the contest! Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/2/2019 6:35:00 PM actually I hate gardening, but I love the roses my daughter in law planted for me.

Joseph May Date: 2/28/2019 9:37:00 PM Beautiful Andrea...love it!.. Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 2/27/2019 5:44:00 PM Beautifully done Andrea! Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/27/2019 7:16:00 AM Great message in the bud that starts to peek. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/27/2019 6:29:00 AM Interesting work. I haven't looked at the contest so have no idea. Thanks for dropping by. Sara Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 2/27/2019 3:07:00 AM So wise... and so true... there will always be another bloom.. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 2/26/2019 11:23:00 PM WoW! Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest theme. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/26/2019 10:51:00 PM Andrea, you outdid yourself in this perfect write.. a winner and a fav. . Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 2/26/2019 9:23:00 PM Very wonderfully done, rising to the occasion and surpassing expectations. Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 2/26/2019 9:14:00 PM Nice haiku! You once said you had won money in contests. All I won in contests were 10 baseball cards and a certificate for Poem of the Month from Poetalk magazine - all they publish is free verse. Yours Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 2/26/2019 7:38:00 PM Beautiful take on the challenge, Andrea. Well done. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/26/2019 7:02:00 PM Nicely done, Andrea. The number requirement made this challenge difficult, but you surely succeeded. Best wishes in Charlie's contest! Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 2/26/2019 5:57:00 PM wonderful.. a bit tricky but you did it perfectly. BG Login to Reply