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On Garden Earth - Hc

where three roses bloom and two roses lie wilting . . . one bud starts to peek For every three souls blossoming are two that have seen their last days. Always at least there is one that has yet on the world to gaze. Feb. 26, 2019 for charles messina's 'Charliekucoup' Poetry Contest

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2019 10:30:00 PM

The roses tell a story! Congrats!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2019 1:32:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2019 7:30:00 AM

A life cycle, beautifully presented, Andrea. Congratulations on your deserved win. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2019 4:41:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Andrea :) -

Joseph May

Date: 3/6/2019 5:20:00 PM

Dropping back with my Congrats Andrea..

Charles Messina

Date: 3/6/2019 2:10:00 PM

Wonderful, Andrea. excellent take on the contest. Congratulations on your win...Charlie :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/2/2019 6:25:00 PM

Lovely metaphor of life, sounds like you are a gardener! Best of luck in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/2/2019 6:35:00 PM

actually I hate gardening, but I love the roses my daughter in law planted for me.

Joseph May

Date: 2/28/2019 9:37:00 PM

Beautiful Andrea...love it!..

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/27/2019 5:44:00 PM

Beautifully done Andrea! Good luck in the contest!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/27/2019 7:16:00 AM

Great message in the bud that starts to peek.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2019 6:29:00 AM

Interesting work. I haven't looked at the contest so have no idea. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Silent One

Date: 2/27/2019 3:07:00 AM

So wise... and so true... there will always be another bloom..

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/26/2019 11:23:00 PM

WoW! Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest theme. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 2/26/2019 10:51:00 PM

Andrea, you outdid yourself in this perfect write.. a winner and a fav. . Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/26/2019 9:23:00 PM

Very wonderfully done, rising to the occasion and surpassing expectations.

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/26/2019 9:14:00 PM

Nice haiku! You once said you had won money in contests. All I won in contests were 10 baseball cards and a certificate for Poem of the Month from Poetalk magazine - all they publish is free verse. Yours Matthew Anish

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/26/2019 7:38:00 PM

Beautiful take on the challenge, Andrea. Well done.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/26/2019 7:02:00 PM

Nicely done, Andrea. The number requirement made this challenge difficult, but you surely succeeded. Best wishes in Charlie's contest!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/26/2019 5:57:00 PM

wonderful.. a bit tricky but you did it perfectly. BG