On Free Verse

I must be -- me to be not, would be contradictions more foul than those in D.C. irrelevant, you chastise make your feelings relate to be a poet but is not the message created by my pen poetically fulfilling for me? if my precepts offer no memorable revelation for you you may not understand now or ever never having viewed the Alps illustrated travel folders generate no sighs yet pen in hand drawing in a deep breath of truth feelings your mind camera candidly clicking world exposed in free style awaken meter petered out with cursed verse confined rhyme precept message a goal sought sometimes conveyed spare the structure; paint the picture sharp strokes of emotion live through the Creator
*For John Freeman’s “Your Free Verse Precept” Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/14/2010 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/2/2010 5:33:00 AM
as always a pleasure! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 10/2/2010 12:45:00 AM
Great write, Carolyn! I wish I could get the hang of free verse, but it is very strange to me. You, however, make it sound so naturally pleasing and enticing at the same time. Congrats on your well deserved win. Dan C
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Date: 10/1/2010 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn ... Smile sorry to be late to the party love Jayne x x x
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Date: 9/30/2010 6:03:00 AM
congrats....nice write!
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Date: 9/27/2010 7:59:00 AM
Big congratulations on your first win, Carolyn! I adore your poem...it conveys a great message...." paint the picture...sharp strokes of emotion...live trough your creator." This is another of your gems! God bless and :). Have a wonderful day. Love and hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Carolyn in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:48:00 PM
Many many congratulations dear friend for this super win. God bless
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:08:00 PM
meter petered out with cursed verse..cool and lots of cool other lines too. Congratulations to you Carolyn! An interesting contest.
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:19:00 PM
Wow! my congratulations on your awesome win in the contest, Carolyn!! A most worthy win! Enjoy!! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:36:00 AM
A wonderful precept description, dear Carolyn! Excellent intrepretation of this contest! Congratulations! Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations for this well deserved win in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:03:00 AM
Good poem, Carolyn. I like the way you compare pictures through poetry to visual images. And you are right. Each poet has his/her own view. Congratulations on your first place win. (Thanks for calling. My emotions are still fragile. But I'm okay. We finished watching Einstein. He had such a loving heart...I like him. I would have enjoyed a walk in my garden with him.)
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Date: 9/26/2010 9:51:00 AM
Carolyn congratulations on your 1st place in John's contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 9/26/2010 9:38:00 AM
"Beatiful poem Lady" as also is your Agape self! "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:41:00 PM
As someone who feels free verse if still the way to express ourselves in this age I love the message and use of words to convey it. Wonderful.
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Date: 9/24/2010 1:02:00 PM
Well spoken ... and spoken for me, all the best in the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2010 8:04:00 PM
Very nice and creative write, Carolyn! Good luck in the contest. And you have soupmail. Take care. Love, your friend, Caroline.
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:30:00 AM
I wish you best of luck in John's contest with this great write, Carolyn! Enjoyed reading it this early afternoon. And thank you for your kind comments. JHope you are doing well and have a great weekend! Love, Gert
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:29:00 AM
I totally agree. With me it's always what the poet says, not the structure. Simplicity and content do it for me. Good write, dear Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2010 6:32:00 AM
Carolyn, my love the line 'sharp strokes of emotion" Good luck with this flowing verse for John's contest.. love Wilma
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Date: 9/21/2010 9:56:00 PM
good luck with this wonderful free verse, sure John will love it too! "Sharp strokes of emotions" Wow this says it all Carolyn! Harry
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Date: 9/21/2010 8:47:00 PM
Interesting how you equate it in the end to living thru the Creator. I am sure John is going to adore this one, Carolyn. And you make it sound like you adore free verse! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/21/2010 7:44:00 PM
Very cool poem! Love the line "meter petered out with cursed verse and confined rhyme." And I do get the "precept" message as I have become a fan of John Freeman's work too. Good luck in his contest! Take care, Diane
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Date: 9/21/2010 3:55:00 PM
YOur toooo much..John will just love it. BG
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