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On Finding Out That Jim Carroll Died September 11, 2009

All these brilliantly shining currents Of memories Of words. Of memories Like waterfalls gushing out the earthen vessel. A tragicly equipped troubadour tantalized By living, at the movies, Nodding just so. Dangling above it all nearly. The vision is almost pristine The way the muses' hand stroked cross wise. With every notion of that mysterious pen, Horizons appeared breeding for purity. Creating direction! The stammering presence of His voice conquered worlds, Til the ink became blood; The precious muse poisoning 'til the pen was like a needle crawling Over the skin of existence; Leaving an honest, filthy trail of bruised dreams. ----------- march 23,2010

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Date: 9/30/2010 6:22:00 AM
Nicely worded and well expressed tribute to Jim Carroll you have paid, merritt
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:55:00 PM
Beautifully done Merrit. A fitting tribute indeed. Wayne
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