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On Fertile Ground

woman on her scooter scoops chili from her insulated bag onto plastic plates deftly juggling movement while the motor idles wounded humanity, street people with shock eyes that smash against the heat, form a line their off beat grins that recall the fertility of hope men accepting plates of food, paper thin pride soreness in bony bodies that have no words for self pity stitched to her bike, she dispenses hot food for the mercurial in city streets, a sparse ground with patches of charity fertile soil for those tossed like bags in a storm burdened by a brutal calm devoid of the green weeds of ego Poem composed: August 18/21

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Date: 9/20/2021 2:18:00 AM
The imagery is powerfully evocative, almost surreal. This is brilliantly done!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/20/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Thomas. Sometimes a scene unfolding before you presents a writing opportunity. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 8/20/2021 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Enjoy your win with blessings.....................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/20/2021 11:34:00 AM
Kind of you to comment. Thank you, Paula. Best wishes always, Brian
Date: 8/20/2021 8:21:00 AM
This powerful poem resonated with me, Brian. Stunning imagery, too. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/20/2021 9:04:00 AM
Thank you, Edward. A superb prompt for your sponsored contest. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 8/19/2021 11:48:00 PM
What an observance ! Scene so much, missed or ignored so often. A detailed picture. Really like this Brian.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/20/2021 6:55:00 AM
Thanks very much, John. I am a watcher. City streets offer many small scenes of power, survival, charity. Be well. With appreciation, Brian

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