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On Fallen Knees

~ In desperation I cry on fallen knees to heaven’s faded glow, pleading with wintered clouds, ice crystals forming, that they part, allowing celestial bodies to appear as she gazes above, for it is the full moon this night which will recite the poetry written from my heart… for her ~

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John Hamilton

Date: 12/16/2019 11:52:00 AM

Another beauty Chris, loved every word!

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2019 12:20:00 PM

Thanks John. I am glad you liked this one.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/14/2019 5:33:00 PM

So much to be seen in the Full Moon Chris....and this is expressed perfectly :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2019 8:13:00 AM

Thank you so very much Heidi.

Hello There

Date: 12/13/2019 2:35:00 PM

Exquisite, my friend... a fave.

Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2019 4:42:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you liked this.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/13/2019 10:03:00 AM

What a wonderful poem of pure love, I hope with all my heart, your prayers are answered. Blessings, Jennifer.

Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2019 10:29:00 AM

It looks like they were. Thank you so much my friend.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/13/2019 1:38:00 AM

Let your word seek her and convey your emotions..Beautifully written..

Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2019 7:29:00 AM

Thanks so very much Jenish. I appreciate your visit today.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/12/2019 10:50:00 PM

I can tell you are inspired by the awesome full moon. Luna has a way to bring out romance in everyone. This is lovely. Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo

Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2019 7:29:00 AM

It was absolutely beautiful Connie. Thank you for all of your kindness

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/12/2019 9:52:00 PM

Poetry can reach beyond the clouds. She will feel your heart. Even when the moon is full. Romance is in the air. This is so beautiful and tender. ~ Brandy

Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2019 7:28:00 AM

Thank you so very much Brandy. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/12/2019 6:26:00 PM

wow...i can feel the emotion in this poem, it makes me want to pray along with you that those clouds shift...it is another beautiful moon and no one should miss it... maybe i should give a huge sigh towards the sky to see if it moves them for you my friend... love the images you give off in this one ...it's exquisite... goodnight Chris :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2019 7:28:00 AM

I guess that huge sigh worked because I had plenty of clear skies last night but then again, a sigh from you always moves me, so why not the clouds too. :) Thank you so very much my friend.