On Fallen Knees

~ In desperation I cry on fallen knees to heaven’s faded glow, pleading with wintered clouds, ice crystals forming, that they part, allowing celestial bodies to appear as she gazes above, for it is the full moon this night which will recite the poetry written from my heart… for her ~
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Hamilton Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Another beauty Chris, loved every word!
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December 16, 2019 at 12:20 PM
Thanks John. I am glad you liked this one.
Sands Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 5:33 PM
So much to be seen in the Full Moon Chris....and this is expressed perfectly :)
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December 16, 2019 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi.
There Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 2:35 PM
Exquisite, my friend... a fave.
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December 13, 2019 at 4:42 PM
Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you liked this.
Proxenos Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 10:03 AM
What a wonderful poem of pure love, I hope with all my heart, your prayers are answered. Blessings, Jennifer.
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December 13, 2019 at 10:29 AM
It looks like they were. Thank you so much my friend.
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December 13, 2019 at 1:38 AM
Let your word seek her and convey your emotions..Beautifully written..
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December 13, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Thanks so very much Jenish. I appreciate your visit today.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 10:50 PM
I can tell you are inspired by the awesome full moon. Luna has a way to bring out romance in everyone. This is lovely. Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo
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December 13, 2019 at 7:29 AM
It was absolutely beautiful Connie. Thank you for all of your kindness
Nicole Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Poetry can reach beyond the clouds. She will feel your heart. Even when the moon is full. Romance is in the air. This is so beautiful and tender. ~ Brandy
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December 13, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Thank you so very much Brandy. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.
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December 12, 2019 at 6:26 PM
wow...i can feel the emotion in this poem, it makes me want to pray along with you that those clouds shift...it is another beautiful moon and no one should miss it... maybe i should give a huge sigh towards the sky to see if it moves them for you my friend... love the images you give off in this one ...it's exquisite... goodnight Chris :) hugs
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December 13, 2019 at 7:28 AM
I guess that huge sigh worked because I had plenty of clear skies last night but then again, a sigh from you always moves me, so why not the clouds too. :) Thank you so very much my friend.
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