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On Earth

Wind breeze rustling up leaves
Earth with grass do caress your feet
Dew drops upon your cheeks

Waves are like coffee foams, in a huge ocean mug
Your hands submerged and wet
You are swimming in a lagoon, then a riverbed

Look up to see, tall snowy hills tips
A valley filled with a myriad of creatures
Natural is at rest, in its natural nest

Flowers, flush and blush:
In their seasonal best dress
Visualize paradise and enjoy it there, on earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marszalowicz Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Love your suit/tie and please don't think me a jerk but I have a few suggestions, you know everybody can do A few things to help get even better: TIGHTEN IT UP just say breezes BECAUSE They are already winds LEAVE OUT SIMPLE WORDS LIKE: there, and are I LIKE THE WORD MYRIAD but is nature at rest? YOU DON'T HAVE TO CONFLICT ACTIVITY AND STILLNESS either, I got sort of confused, and lastly did you stop short on this poem? 'cause the world has deserts, caverns, trees, animals, (including humans)
Espinola Collins Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:06 PM
The perfect Earth! Lovely write! Ana :)
Williams Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:29 PM
Thanks Ana. Yes, the perfect earth was and one day to be again and better. Amen
Duggan Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 11:48 PM
Hi Ronald, this is such a beautiful poem, actually I don't have to visualise I just see it, and what lovely sight they are the earth and grass under my feet one of the most beautiful feelings, thank you for sharing this delightful little poem and take care......Vera
Williams Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks for your comment Vera. I am glad that you enjoyed the Poem. That is what sharing is all about. I do have more nature Poems for your enjoyment. Also when you have some time Visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net and Book.
Gist Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Indeed the sound of a witness to the loving kindnesses of Jah! Come through my spot when you have time.
Williams Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 4:19 PM
Thanks Hamilton, will do.
Evans Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 6:19 PM
A soothing tranquil poem. The line 'Visualize paradise, and enjoy it there' is exceptional.
Williams Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Thanks, all praise unto the Lord Jesus Christ. Amen
Wang Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 3:34 AM
It is so happy that we all live in the earth of heaven. Everything is so holy and noble! While the breeze blows, life is so colorful. We all like to live a simple and honest life. Happiness is our eternal eyes. I appreciate your passion and dedication to poetry and life. Good luck to you!
Williams Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Thanks Shmily, God Bless you and thanks for your very thought and sincere comments and put in very visual words. Thanks again, for very true and honest words.
Thayer Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Beautiful, Love It, Inspires.
Williams Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 3:10 PM
Thank you Vickie, All glory and praise be he unto Him. God, Lord Jesus Christ. Amen, blessings, also visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Lindley Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:50 AM
A wondrous and refreshingly fine presentation my friend. A PEACEFUL CALM CAME TO ME WHILE READING THIS FINE GEM. A fav... thanks..
Williams Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Thanks, Robert, I am glad that you have been blessed by it. Amen, Praise Him. Blessings
Horn Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Now if we would leave nature and God alone so they can appreciate what they have given us. Jim Horn
Williams Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Amen, certainly agree James. Also, try to visit my website when you get a chance www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Maier Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 10:28 PM
Blissful and Peaceful. This poem took me away from everyday's life and worries. It provides me with imagination of a blissful and peaceful, calm world. Very nice.
Williams Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 11:47 PM
Thanks Jieranal, I am glad that it did such that. Amen, also, when you get a chance visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net and book. Blessings
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Nice visuals, Ronald. WEll done!
Williams Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:36 PM
Amen, Thanks, only try to relay His beauty in creation. Amen
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Beautifully penned, Ronald. The wonder of God's handiwork is breathtaking, and awe inspiring. This poem captures the essence of this truth w/spiritual clarity and depth. Love and joy always, my Christian brother.
Williams Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:18 PM
Thanks, Freddie, you take care as always and God Bless. Amen
Parveen Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Actually, visualized each line in the poem as I read it, so calming and refreshing. Great write Ronald:)
Williams Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 5:01 PM
Thanks, I got inspired to pen a few poem when I did have my supernatural experience with the Lord. Amen, www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:55 AM
- Nature is our earthly paradise :) - A wonderful poem, Ronald :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Thanks, paradise only regained in Jesus Christ. Amen
Barden Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Wonderfully penned and eloquently phrased, Ronald ... I enjoyed this very much - keep up the great work! God Bless!
Williams Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Thanks, I got inspired to pen a few poem when I did have my supernatural experience with the Lord. Amen
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