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On Earth

Wind breeze rustling up leaves Earth with grass do caress your feet Waves are like coffee foams in a huge ocean mug Your hands submerged and wet You swimming in a lagoon, then a riverbed Look up to see, tall snowy hills like icy iceberg tips Valleys filled with a myriad of animals; natural is at rest in its nest Flowers, flush and blush in their seasonal best All creatures are at peace; Visualize paradise and enjoy it there

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Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 2/11/2018 3:27:00 PM

Love your suit/tie and please don't think me a jerk but I have a few suggestions, you know everybody can do A few things to help get even better: TIGHTEN IT UP just say breezes BECAUSE They are already winds LEAVE OUT SIMPLE WORDS LIKE: there, and are I LIKE THE WORD MYRIAD but is nature at rest? YOU DON'T HAVE TO CONFLICT ACTIVITY AND STILLNESS either, I got sort of confused, and lastly did you stop short on this poem? 'cause the world has deserts, caverns, trees, animals, (including humans)

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 2/8/2018 6:06:00 PM

The perfect Earth! Lovely write! Ana :)

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/8/2018 7:29:00 PM

Thanks Ana. Yes, the perfect earth was and one day to be again and better. Amen

Vera Duggan

Date: 12/31/2017 11:48:00 PM

Hi Ronald, this is such a beautiful poem, actually I don't have to visualise I just see it, and what lovely sight they are the earth and grass under my feet one of the most beautiful feelings, thank you for sharing this delightful little poem and take care......Vera

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 1/1/2018 8:37:00 AM

Thanks for your comment Vera. I am glad that you enjoyed the Poem. That is what sharing is all about. I do have more nature Poems for your enjoyment. Also when you have some time Visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net and Book.

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 12/2/2017 3:17:00 PM

Indeed the sound of a witness to the loving kindnesses of Jah! Come through my spot when you have time.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 12/2/2017 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Hamilton, will do.

Ricky Muse

Date: 11/15/2017 6:19:00 PM

A soothing tranquil poem. The line 'Visualize paradise, and enjoy it there' is exceptional.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 11/15/2017 6:39:00 PM

Thanks, all praise unto the Lord Jesus Christ. Amen

Shmily Wang

Date: 10/18/2017 3:34:00 AM

It is so happy that we all live in the earth of heaven. Everything is so holy and noble! While the breeze blows, life is so colorful. We all like to live a simple and honest life. Happiness is our eternal eyes. I appreciate your passion and dedication to poetry and life. Good luck to you!

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 10/18/2017 8:32:00 AM

Thanks Shmily, God Bless you and thanks for your very thought and sincere comments and put in very visual words. Thanks again, for very true and honest words.

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 10/17/2017 8:47:00 AM

Beautiful, Love It, Inspires.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 10/17/2017 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Vickie, All glory and praise be he unto Him. God, Lord Jesus Christ. Amen, blessings, also visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/24/2017 7:50:00 AM

A wondrous and refreshingly fine presentation my friend. A PEACEFUL CALM CAME TO ME WHILE READING THIS FINE GEM. A fav... thanks..

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 9/24/2017 8:54:00 AM

Thanks, Robert, I am glad that you have been blessed by it. Amen, Praise Him. Blessings

James Horn

Date: 9/1/2017 12:54:00 PM

Now if we would leave nature and God alone so they can appreciate what they have given us. Jim Horn

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 9/1/2017 1:04:00 PM

Amen, certainly agree James. Also, try to visit my website when you get a chance www.jesuschristvisitation.net

Jieranai Maier

Date: 8/28/2017 10:28:00 PM

Blissful and Peaceful. This poem took me away from everyday's life and worries. It provides me with imagination of a blissful and peaceful, calm world. Very nice.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 8/28/2017 11:47:00 PM

Thanks Jieranal, I am glad that it did such that. Amen, also, when you get a chance visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net and book. Blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2017 5:33:00 PM

Nice visuals, Ronald. WEll done!

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 8/28/2017 5:36:00 PM

Amen, Thanks, only try to relay His beauty in creation. Amen

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/28/2017 5:16:00 PM

Beautifully penned, Ronald. The wonder of God's handiwork is breathtaking, and awe inspiring. This poem captures the essence of this truth w/spiritual clarity and depth. Love and joy always, my Christian brother.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 8/28/2017 5:18:00 PM

Thanks, Freddie, you take care as always and God Bless. Amen

Tahira Parveen

Date: 8/23/2017 10:52:00 AM

Actually, visualized each line in the poem as I read it, so calming and refreshing. Great write Ronald:)

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 8/23/2017 5:01:00 PM

Thanks, I got inspired to pen a few poem when I did have my supernatural experience with the Lord. Amen, www.jesuschristvisitation.net

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2017 4:55:00 AM

- Nature is our earthly paradise :) - A wonderful poem, Ronald :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 8/23/2017 5:00:00 PM

Thanks, paradise only regained in Jesus Christ. Amen

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/22/2017 10:25:00 PM

Wonderfully penned and eloquently phrased, Ronald ... I enjoyed this very much - keep up the great work! God Bless!

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 8/23/2017 4:59:00 PM

Thanks, I got inspired to pen a few poem when I did have my supernatural experience with the Lord. Amen