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On Eagles Wings

Paying no tribute to the craggy outcroppings
     of its lofty aerie,
     this sentinel of freedom takes its leave.
     Soaring with the courage of a Feudal Warrior,
     proud of his nobility, secure in his repute.
     Floating effortlessly on 
     Zephyrus winds sweeping wave,
     as if he were its only passenger.
     His keen vision sees mortality
     and dispenses it out of necessity
     with irreproachable honesty and no regrets.
     Fiercely challenging the bounds of earth and heavens,
     he knows no foe, save one.
     One whose frailty of condition
     can't perceive of this natural independence,
     and knows not of its integrity.
     In spite,do prevail great raptor,
     and with you carry hope
     that will nourish us all,
     your nest bound hatchlings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 3:24 PM
A spectacular tribute to the Eagle...the regal bird that represents America! Outstanding Charlie! : )
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Thank you Connie...
Williams Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Charlie for inviting me to read your 'Of Eagle Wings'. It's truly so profoundly described - The Noble Eagle, a fearless warrior and tenaciously territorial. Killing to feed not out of waste - Pity most Humans do not see the wisdom in your words - a great 7+++
Smith Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 8:12 AM
So glad you took the time to visit, I really felt some similarities with your write, like minds I suppose, thanks Maria...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Raptor rapture indeed Charlie! Reminiscent of some of my favourites by Tennyson and Pratt; well done! 7 and thank you for sharing xomo
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:49 AM
Thank you Maureen...
Kimathi Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 7:39 AM
Congrats Charles, for your placement with this wonderful piece!!! ;-)
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Thanks Teddy...
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October 5, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Charlie, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "from my pen" if you'd like. SMILES ~LINDA~
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Thank you Linda...
La France Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:52 AM
Charlie, your write truly touched my soul, I am a lover of all birds and you have penned an absolutely excellent poem, I am loving this 7 ~
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Broken Wings, you are as soulful a poet that I've met here on the soup. If I can manage to touch yours, I've won a very special award. Hearts and thoughts are prizes I treasure, ataboys in a contest, not so much, love to you and thanks, Charlie..
Onclaud Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 6:40 PM
you weave such lovely words!.. beautiful, charlie!,,huggs
Smith Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thank you for your kindness Nette, I'm so glad I can share them with someone as gracious as you...
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Charlie, I was in a raptor magazine last year. Too bad you had not written this poem a year ago . You could have been in that raptor magazine with one this good!!
Smith Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 9:14 PM
Andrea, I'm so glad you read this one. I'm flattered that you would think anything I've written would be worthy of printing in any magazine. I do so appreciate the compliment.
Ashe Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Nobility in the air! You've captured the eagle's real essence in this write! ...and the eaglets will be provided for! Nice write Charlie!
Smith Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 7:37 PM
We can only hope Walter. Thank you...
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