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On Dawn's Sweet Breeze

On dawn’s sweet breeze

Fade to blue
in starlight drippings
The sunrise sings
enchanted song
When turquoise tints
horizon’s dreaming
Can morning wait
for very long
~
In hues of gold
and amber teasings
On dawn’s sweet breeze
your scent does flow
My heartbeat swirls
of joy receiving
I breathe a sigh,
I love you so

Good morning Soupers

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/11/2017 12:18:00 PM

You wake up each morning with love and romance. Good Morning in afternoon ;)

Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 12:25:00 PM

Hi there Kim, it's the best way to wake up in my opinion. :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/11/2017 11:20:00 AM

Nice little eye opener Chris, great way to meet the day...

Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 11:59:00 AM

Thanks so much Charlie. I appreciate you stopping by today.

Joseph May

Date: 7/11/2017 9:33:00 AM

Your words are woven beautifully with dawn's sweet breeze...

Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:42:00 AM

Thanks so very much Joseph for your kind thoughts today.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/11/2017 9:23:00 AM

So romantic, Chris, nice poem:)

Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Jo for always being so nice to me.

White Wolf

Date: 7/11/2017 9:04:00 AM

Now, what's not to love about this beauty! I too breathe a sigh, and question why? Can't I? Wicked write, Chris

Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:41:00 AM

Yep, you sure can. :) Thanks so much my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2017 7:44:00 AM

- Good morning ... a happy singing morning bird :) - ... as usual ... here's rain - Lovely poem my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:41:00 AM

Good morning Sunshine. Hey, that sounds like a song. :) Thanks so very much Anne Lise.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/11/2017 7:23:00 AM

This is a beautiful bright poem to read. I like the turquoise tints horizon's dreaming. The reader can feel the joy. So nice Chris :) Thank you for sharing :)

Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:40:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend for everything you do for me. I cherish your friendship.

Sara Ella

Date: 7/11/2017 7:19:00 AM

Good Morning Chris :) This is so beautiful-a great way to start the day-with a smile :)

Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:40:00 AM

Good morning Sara. Thank you for your kind words today.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/11/2017 7:01:00 AM

Morning Chris. I have nothing to say. Wait yes I do. This is poetically perfect and solid. Thank goodness morning can never wait and rises. Well done in its entirety. Enjoy the morning.

Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:39:00 AM

Good morning Lisa. What was that song, you say it best, when you say nothing at all? Just you stopping by makes me smile. :) Thank you so much my friend.