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On Dawn's Sweet Breeze

On dawn’s sweet breeze Fade to blue in starlight drippings The sunrise sings enchanted song When turquoise tints horizon’s dreaming Can morning wait for very long ~ In hues of gold and amber teasings On dawn’s sweet breeze your scent does flow My heartbeat swirls of joy receiving I breathe a sigh, I love you so Good morning Soupers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/11/2017 12:18:00 PM
You wake up each morning with love and romance. Good Morning in afternoon ;)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 12:25:00 PM
Hi there Kim, it's the best way to wake up in my opinion. :)
Date: 7/11/2017 11:20:00 AM
Nice little eye opener Chris, great way to meet the day...
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie. I appreciate you stopping by today.
Date: 7/11/2017 9:33:00 AM
Your words are woven beautifully with dawn's sweet breeze...
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thanks so very much Joseph for your kind thoughts today.
Date: 7/11/2017 9:23:00 AM
So romantic, Chris, nice poem:)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Jo for always being so nice to me.
Date: 7/11/2017 9:04:00 AM
Now, what's not to love about this beauty! I too breathe a sigh, and question why? Can't I? Wicked write, Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:41:00 AM
Yep, you sure can. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 7/11/2017 7:44:00 AM
- Good morning ... a happy singing morning bird :) - ... as usual ... here's rain - Lovely poem my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:41:00 AM
Good morning Sunshine. Hey, that sounds like a song. :) Thanks so very much Anne Lise.
Date: 7/11/2017 7:23:00 AM
This is a beautiful bright poem to read. I like the turquoise tints horizon's dreaming. The reader can feel the joy. So nice Chris :) Thank you for sharing :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:40:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend for everything you do for me. I cherish your friendship.
Date: 7/11/2017 7:19:00 AM
Good Morning Chris :) This is so beautiful-a great way to start the day-with a smile :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:40:00 AM
Good morning Sara. Thank you for your kind words today.
Date: 7/11/2017 7:01:00 AM
Morning Chris. I have nothing to say. Wait yes I do. This is poetically perfect and solid. Thank goodness morning can never wait and rises. Well done in its entirety. Enjoy the morning.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:39:00 AM
Good morning Lisa. What was that song, you say it best, when you say nothing at all? Just you stopping by makes me smile. :) Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 7/11/2017 6:59:00 AM
What a wonderful romantic poem to wake to Chris good morning to you I hope your day is good:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 10:38:00 AM
Good morning Jan. Thank you so very much my friend.

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