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[This is one of four poem manuscripts, dated 1981, which I found while going through some old papers. I recall writing it, but I do not remember the circumstances. This is the first time this poem has been exposed to the public.]

He noticed unfettered wisps of hair Limping against her shoulder, there like hints of rebellion, Tickling his inner consciousness; He could not see her face from where he sat, But he imagined it of consequence Self-assured and strong, that Face which mirrors smug confidence as she claims his place In line, flaunting her prim estate Each pinnacle he might have seasoned Were he a woman, or so he reasoned.

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Date: 7/26/2021 3:00:00 PM
You have described this so well "Self-assured and strong, that Face which mirrors smug confidence"
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Date: 7/26/2021 4:07:00 PM
Any way, I know I was jealous of someone who got the job I wanted so much...and, apparently, I reasoned it was because she was a woman. Huh?

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