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On Cloud Nine - Ws

In sunless dark dusk winter blizzard blows across the road I walk chilled back home. Cupful hot coffee my wife gives me at fireplace, we’re on cloud nine together. _________________ January 13, 2023 Syllable count : 5 7 7 (HMS) Contest : Winter Sedoka Sponsored by : Charles

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:22:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/25/2023 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write with a great ending. Have a great day..............

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/25/2023 10:07:00 PM

Thank you.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 5:26:00 AM

Lovely write, Subimal. Loved the last line! Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Charlie

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/25/2023 10:06:00 PM

Thank you, Charles for the placement.