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On Cloud Nine - Ws

In sunless dark dusk
winter blizzard blows across
the road I walk chilled back home.

Cupful hot coffee
my wife gives me at fireplace,
we’re on cloud nine together.

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January 13, 2023
Syllable count : 5 7 7 (HMS)
Contest : Winter Sedoka
Sponsored by : Charles

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Date: 1/26/2023 6:22:00 AM
I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 1/25/2023 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write with a great ending. Have a great day..............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/25/2023 10:07:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/25/2023 5:26:00 AM
Lovely write, Subimal. Loved the last line! Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Charlie
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/25/2023 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Charles for the placement.

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