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On Christmas Day

On Christmas day I cried, No family to hug. Only a blessed pair of shoulders to shrugg. Cough drops and lost salvia. Precipitation hot as lava. Living room packed yet so empty. Heavy tears yet no sympathy. On Christmas day I cried! Game of memory in this darkened scenery. Ready to be prosecuted, Life or execute me! Open gifts in heaven, Unwrap love at eleven. Lord knows on Christmas day I cried! Bury me an ornament on a broken tree. Let the world know I was all I could be! When it all ends, it'll all be the same. The ground will still flood when it rains. Now you know on Christmas day I cried!!

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Date: 5/15/2017 12:29:00 PM
A heartfelt emotional sad write. Unfortunately Christmas is not a happy time for many Jerry:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2008 10:43:00 AM
So sad but congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura
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Date: 10/6/2008 10:55:00 AM
Jerry, this truly breaks my heart. No one should be alone, especially on Christmas, but I sadly know so many are. Congratulations on your featured write. You did capture our emotion here very well. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/6/2008 8:40:00 AM
Jerry you certainly did pour your heart in this write - congrats on being featured and God Bless
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Date: 10/6/2008 8:00:00 AM
I saw my Grandmother cry when I was a kid on the first Christmas after my Uncle died. He had Asthma and lived to be 44. This was an emotional write. Congratulations Jerry, on having it featured. Vince
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Date: 10/5/2008 5:52:00 PM
Holidays are very difficult times to be alone. Your poem expressed it poignantly. Well done~ Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2008 4:45:00 PM
This is a reminder that many spend Christmas lonely. The vivid imagery forwards your thoughts in this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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