On Christmas Day

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"Travel light" Santa said to me as I grappled for all my most   
treasured belongings. I stuffed them all in a duffle bag, then with the silliest 
of grin on my face I said, " Ready"  
The ride up was exhilarating to say the least, and the landing well 
lets just say I don't recall getting there...
It felt like I was placed in a big glass bauble filled with tinsel,
joyful elves and little miniscule hourglasses containing reflective 
light particles that flew out into the atmosphere through 
smokescreen windows, tinted with pink magic glass.  
I was tired from the trip so Santa led me to this little room made of logwood, 
then he handing me a peppermint hot chocolate and said, " good good dreams, my girl " 
What did I dream you ask ? Well, its much too long to retell today, 
you will just have to wait until tomorrow,  when its Christmas day !

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Date: 12/14/2022 5:46:00 AM
Lovely! Brilliantly original! I think you would enjoy reading "The angel who lost her tree," It is a delightful Christmas story, sparkly with flavor and sense. Blessings!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/14/2022 12:09:00 PM
I will check it out and if its nice I will read it at church come Saturday . thank you for your support :)
Date: 12/14/2022 1:11:00 AM
What fantasy, We await the day for an encore. Hugs.
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Date: 12/14/2022 4:21:00 AM
Thank you dear Victor for dropping on my fantasy world :)
Date: 12/13/2022 9:42:00 PM
A poem rather amusing about a trip with Santa ! I envy your ride in a glass bauble with elves as company! Beautiful and humorous at the same time, Rose !
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Date: 12/14/2022 4:21:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by Valsa. I will ask Santa to send you your very own glass bauble then :)
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