On Calvary Hill

I awoke in the morning to a different world From the world I'd left, they'd find it absurd To alls past acclaim, on Calvary Hill It was not he who bled, but a woman's spill She, the daughter, of a long loved king To him now lost, what does his tomorrow bring Naked to bare, cast amongst others Was it so bad that she now smothers Crowned of thorns, sorrow postured be Never should ones icons, be as we see In any world that this event was undertaken No matter the cause, believed, now forsaken Yet nothing was indifferent it was the same old nails That held her to post, yet the same people wailed Days turned to decades, centuries now having past Then I awoke the next day, not even aghast .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 9:11 AM
intriguing thoughtful write..
Fraser Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Another one of my dark writes Olive. Fantasy, Dark, Nature & Romance are my favourites, mostly to rhyme, James :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 7:53 AM
I enjoyed rereading this piece.
Fraser Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 4:36 PM
Kinda different I know, but it's good to think outside the box. Many thanks Richard, James :)
Vaso Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 2:55 PM
This is absolutely spectacular, a great write!
Fraser Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Thanks kindly Arthur, a moment of thought, and my poem became, James :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 5:58 AM
Not exactly sure how to take this one...I hope that you did it to make people think..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you stopping by, reading and taking time to comment..I have got a Woodpecker that visits quite often plus we have got a bird called Northern Flicker which is a woodpecker but he pecks in the dirt..It is a beautiul bird..I see what seems to be two pairs of them in my front yard quite often..Sara
Fraser Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 1:35 PM
I write never to answer, but leave any messages for readers to find. My range of subjects is probably the most on the Soup, as I'll write about anything. If it's something that interests me at the time, I'll write it. Woodpeckers, I haven't written about yet. Thanks for visiting Sara, James......
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Interesting perspective. The reality is that we are in need of redemption and sadly a freedom purchased at great cost has been sadly discarded by so many people. I like how you make the reader ponder this event.
Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Thank you Richard, James......
Eggins Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Brilliant...Bravo...nothing else needs to be said...love Jayne x
Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Thank you Jayne. I'm starting to enjoy writing again after hardly writing anything for quite a few months. Well, certainly not like I wrote before, quantity that is, James xx
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