On Calling It What It Is

theft of innocence
             mislabeled ~

        gift of self loathing




MagiCicada13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Koplin Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Big hug Mo!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Ditto dear <3 btw, I did challenge myself to write one on topic years ago, an early post here called "Surviving Innocence" (but I think it's kinda crappy) and one on the resulting self abuse (less crappy) ;), xomo!
Raynes Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 7:52 PM
This still happens today, as a former teacher it was disturbing the occurances and how well its hid by these kids. Lovely striking forceful write. X
Raynes Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 11:38 PM
Theres a fairly good system in place now to identify and then report and notify the right ppl, i worked in some very different places, from rich to poor, and the percentage of kids raped seemed to stay the same, the last school was about 7% across the school.thanks mo :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 10:51 PM
Thank you Lewis. "Former", how you doing with that? Big change. I look back at high school now and I can see how obvious it must have been to some teachers. A deeper appreciation I have now. Hugs you. Keep on truckin' and as we used to say in my former career, Rubber Side Down! xomo
Krutsinger Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:15 PM
You have expressed this horribleness well.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:26 PM
Thank you my friend. xomo
Wolf Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:04 PM
Oy! Just remember that in Chicago you've got a friend! :) Eternally, gw
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:06 PM
A dear one at that <3
Leffanta Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 1:52 PM
"gift" is the German word for "Poison" which certainly applies here! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Clink ~ cheers my friend. xomo
Faulkner Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Well, I hope you exchange that 'gift' for self-esteem and self-care, because you deserve it - sending virtual hugs xo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 7:56 PM
Lovely thought. I've worked hard on my self esteem despite the efforts of less healthy family members whome I cannot blame for their shortcomings. It's just got such deep roots, deep in the hippocampus and that trigger happy amygdala doesn't help ;), Thank you so much my friend. Hugs back! xomo <3
Lamoureux Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:55 AM
Shame is the devils greatest accomplishment for it separates us from God and makes us believe that we are unlovable. Once we learn this is not true, we become transformed, much like your butterfly. Hugs Rick.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:58 AM
I am just drying my wings now <3 Hugs you, xomo
Deo Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:26 AM
This is what I preach against, as I may have said, Romans chapter 8:1 is the Magna Carta for all folks, especially women who made made to feel guilt, regret, self-loathing. But shrinls talk about going through stages of recovery: anger is justified... before acceptance. But, sure, I like the brevity of Jeanne McGee. I agree. brother from your Earth Mother! shalom shalOM
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:53 AM
Indeed, the opposite of "innocence" being "guilt", and self consuming is the sentence. Thank you bro, xomo
Mcgee Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 7:50 AM
powerful!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:53 AM
Thank you Jeanne, xomo!
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