On An Old Poem

I read a poem yesterday
An old poem
By a poet preparing to past away
It unravels threads
In my spirits well seamed hem
I am huanted
By why she had to say

I would go back and read
It to myself again,
But may not find the path
From which I fled
Shaking like a child
Before its quaking dread.

Was it the calmness 
Of the preparation
The suddeness
Of my intrusion
The awareness of the desperation
That life is a pen
We write nothing with
And imprisoned by it
So long
We are strangers 
In our ultimate world?

I appraised a poem
Yesterday, a sad poem
Words wheeling lariats 
Around my bed, haunted
Now by a voice I hear
But do not know
Casting me in nakedness
To stand, and face my fear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/16/2009 8:18:00 AM
I love the way your words describe the reading...'wheeling lariats" ....outstanding descriptions, you have a marvelous gift of choosing just the proper words, its magic makes the reader want more. ~ loved it!~ Carrie
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:03:00 AM
Stand. Standing is key this poem, like all of yours, is haunting. I'd love to know the poem of which you speak in the beginning here. sometimes the moment is tatamount to understanding...and if read at another when, that thread may not be threaded as it first was, as the time has passed for knowing what we already learned when first read. it is done. love this, Kristin
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