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On a Vacant Field

On a vacant field A red fox meditates A hawk circles A squirrel rolls the dice A school bus passes An old man

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/4/2023 5:52:00 AM
What a scene. The field won't be vacant for long, and I hesitate to hazard a guess as to the fate of each of your characters, or who meets it first. You certainly know how to leave the ending to the imagination of your readers. ;-)
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