On a Vacant Field

On a vacant field

A red fox meditates

A hawk circles

A squirrel rolls the dice

A school bus passes

An old man
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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October 4, 2023 at 5:52 AM
What a scene. The field won't be vacant for long, and I hesitate to hazard a guess as to the fate of each of your characters, or who meets it first. You certainly know how to leave the ending to the imagination of your readers. ;-)
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