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On a Swing

I'd like to glide through sparkle dust
on a swing of golden threads
I'd go up to touch my toes against
a rainbows' magic crest
With my head against an angels' breast
that we'd fall to earth again is just

I'd watch as daylight spreads before
my world to make a glow of golden lair
A joyous birth of dawns' new day
then darkness swoops to block the sight
And wishes float to stars sweet light
How could I ever ask for more?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/21/2019 7:37:00 AM
Your words are the words of an angel, my friend; i feel they were whispered to you as you slumbered.
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Date: 6/10/2019 8:59:00 PM
Beautiful, fun and dreamy :)
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Date: 6/9/2019 6:56:00 PM
Those first two lines give me joy!
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 6/9/2019 8:03:00 PM
I hope a smile on your face too. I find it so much harder to write about the good feelings and also to tap into my inner childhood delights.
Date: 6/9/2019 10:30:00 AM
Such a sweet poem - feathery, fun and poetically awesome! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 6/9/2019 5:34:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, You just made my day with your comment...thanks so much. Jeanne
Date: 6/9/2019 2:37:00 AM
Lovely images. Glad you found your mislaid poem. It's a gem.
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 6/9/2019 10:30:00 AM
me too!
Date: 6/9/2019 2:25:00 AM
Lovely, Jeanne. I particularly loved the first two lines of the first stanza. So...whimsical. Thanks for sharing and for your visit to my page. Much appreciated.
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Date: 6/8/2019 1:02:00 PM
Wonderful, uplifting piece! Enjoyed :))) xomo
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 6/8/2019 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Maureen...I'd written it about a month ago and just refound it I'm happy to say. I'm glad you liked it. Jeanne