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On a November Afternoon

Grant me a peaceful afternoon with hums alighting on nodding blooms, butterfly wings and a soothing lullaby whispered by washing hanging on a line. Let life be settled by a calm with pleasant talk and camomile tea and overhead, the soundless drift of clouds across a placid sky and leaves weaved in patterns to print a cooling shade upon a table set with scones, cream and raspberry jam, and above all, birdsong sweet enough to camouflage the sound of screams and falling bombs.

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Date: 11/6/2023 6:22:00 PM
Some afternoon! I join you in this peaceful prayerlike poem, Paul. "lullaby whispered by washing hanging on a line" is my favorite line in this oneL)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/8/2023 5:14:00 AM
I understand that. War is big business and the world is overpopulated. It's all about money. In Isreal people are killing each other because someone worships a different God. How asinine is that? Humans killing humans, thats what we do. It's disgusting, so I focus on your pleasant afternoon:)
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/8/2023 4:35:00 AM
Many thanks Daniel...so good to hear from you. Fear that the prayer like incantation masks a disturbing reality. Regards, Paul
Date: 11/6/2023 10:30:00 AM
How calm the setting you've described that would soothe the wildest beast, Paul. Until reality hits and we're reminded that carrion feast on the spoils of war... droning out sweet birdsongs in a world where so many things are wrong. Written with your usual talent for telling it like it is.
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/8/2023 4:13:00 AM
Enjoying the good fortune of living under peaceful circumstances whilst others suffer terribly challenges our humanity and begs the question of what moral response is appropriate. The starting point is of course compassion and emotional empathy. Always troubles me. Appreciate your thouhtful comments Lin.
Date: 11/6/2023 8:48:00 AM
we would all wish for such an afternoon, Paul
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/8/2023 3:56:00 AM
Indeed, although the real world enters through a crack in conscience. Thanks John .

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