On a November Afternoon

Grant me a peaceful afternoon 
with hums alighting on nodding blooms,
butterfly wings and a soothing
lullaby whispered by washing
hanging on a line.

Let life be settled by a calm 
with pleasant talk and camomile tea
and overhead, the soundless 
drift of clouds across a placid sky
and leaves weaved in patterns
to print a cooling shade
upon a table set with scones,
cream and raspberry jam,
and above all,
birdsong sweet enough
to camouflage the sound
of screams and falling bombs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Turner Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 6:22 PM
Some afternoon! I join you in this peaceful prayerlike poem, Paul. "lullaby whispered by washing hanging on a line" is my favorite line in this oneL)
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November 8, 2023 at 5:14 AM
I understand that. War is big business and the world is overpopulated. It's all about money. In Isreal people are killing each other because someone worships a different God. How asinine is that? Humans killing humans, thats what we do. It's disgusting, so I focus on your pleasant afternoon:)
Willason Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 4:35 AM
Many thanks Daniel...so good to hear from you. Fear that the prayer like incantation masks a disturbing reality. Regards, Paul
Lane Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 10:30 AM
How calm the setting you've described that would soothe the wildest beast, Paul. Until reality hits and we're reminded that carrion feast on the spoils of war... droning out sweet birdsongs in a world where so many things are wrong. Written with your usual talent for telling it like it is.
Willason Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 4:13 AM
Enjoying the good fortune of living under peaceful circumstances whilst others suffer terribly challenges our humanity and begs the question of what moral response is appropriate. The starting point is of course compassion and emotional empathy. Always troubles me. Appreciate your thouhtful comments Lin.
Lawless Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 8:48 AM
we would all wish for such an afternoon, Paul
Willason Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 3:56 AM
Indeed, although the real world enters through a crack in conscience. Thanks John .
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