On a Lovely, Festive Summer Day

The willow sways in the breeze
       Flowers emerge from their leaves
     Forest creatures come forth to play
       It's a lovely, festive summer day

     Inside my home's another story
       In family quarrels there is no glory
     Why can't my own siblings see
       Today is custom-made 
                            ~ the world agrees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 4:48 PM
This sounds like a delightfully festive day!
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 11:00 AM
While there is no magic bullet throwing it out there may give a reader cause for pause. Poetry I often think is a powerful tool that can change minds around issues and become that ah ha moment. Great poem, can't go past a sunny day as backdrop to your message. Best regards David in NZ
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Thanks David in NZ. Hoping it's a sunny day down your way. Smiles for miles, Gershon
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Hello Gershon, brother, sister, or brothere andbrothers or sisters and sisters sometimes do not get along. They disagree. to disagree is normal. Quarrels never get resolved. or sometimes it does. Enjoy yourday my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Hello Gershon peace in families Gershon. Enjoy your day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:15 PM
So true. (I sure didn't get along with my sisters. Most of my friends didn't get along with their siblings either). Here's to Peace in the Family, gw
Baker Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Another clear snapshot of the delima of childhood. The differences between siblings is amazing. Caught up in our own ego, trying to find our self worth; blinds us to the beauty of the diffences in others. A poet friend, Bill
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:10 PM
Gosh, you must have been an awesome brother, Bill. As for me, I was a total jerk. ~ Steve Martin
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