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On a Lovely, Festive Summer Day

The willow sways in the breeze Flowers emerge from their leaves Forest creatures come forth to play It's a lovely, festive summer day Inside my home's another story In family quarrels there is no glory Why can't my own siblings see Today is custom-made ~ the world agrees

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/21/2021 4:48:00 PM

This sounds like a delightfully festive day!

David Smith

Date: 11/18/2021 11:00:00 AM

While there is no magic bullet throwing it out there may give a reader cause for pause. Poetry I often think is a powerful tool that can change minds around issues and become that ah ha moment. Great poem, can't go past a sunny day as backdrop to your message. Best regards David in NZ

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2021 6:16:00 PM

Thanks David in NZ. Hoping it's a sunny day down your way. Smiles for miles, Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/17/2021 12:01:00 PM

Hello Gershon, brother, sister, or brothere andbrothers or sisters and sisters sometimes do not get along. They disagree. to disagree is normal. Quarrels never get resolved. or sometimes it does. Enjoy yourday my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/19/2021 11:51:00 AM

Hello Gershon peace in families Gershon. Enjoy your day my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2021 6:15:00 PM

So true. (I sure didn't get along with my sisters. Most of my friends didn't get along with their siblings either). Here's to Peace in the Family, gw

Bill Baker

Date: 11/17/2021 11:36:00 AM

Another clear snapshot of the delima of childhood. The differences between siblings is amazing. Caught up in our own ego, trying to find our self worth; blinds us to the beauty of the diffences in others. A poet friend, Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2021 6:10:00 PM

Gosh, you must have been an awesome brother, Bill. As for me, I was a total jerk. ~ Steve Martin