On a Loss

The pearl-gray sky of early morning harmonized with my mood; color without color life without meaning. From an original poem "A Jackson" Liberum Divisa 7 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gregory Richard Barden Date wrote: 23-July-2021

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/31/2021 3:44:00 PM

This is a sad one, Terry. Good luck in the contest.

Terry Miller
Date: 9/1/2021 2:13:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Gary Radice

Date: 8/30/2021 2:41:00 AM

This stands alone well Terry. It's a poignant theme - and any low mood tends to be worse in the morning - but there is also beauty and hope in your words "color without color" - there IS color - there IS hope. Cheers - Gary

Terry Miller
Date: 9/1/2021 2:14:00 AM

Thank you, Gary, for your kind comments.