On a Loop or In a Loop?

Lost in a fog chasing a clue

This riddle’s got me feeling askew

My brain took a stroll then slipped

Now my logic’s completely flipped

Still nowhere near a clue
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Baker Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 3:26 PM
I enjoyed this fine Limerick, Christopher. I'll be following your poetry now! A poet in Texas, Bill
Delegans Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 10:02 AM
Thanks, Bill. Limericks are fun and I definitely enjoy reading yours as well.
Greenhough Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 2:32 PM
Aren't puzzles fun? This poem was enjoyable
Delegans Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 10:03 AM
The best and worst but always fun! lol
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 1:06 PM
good rhyming word for your twist at the end. Nicely done
Delegans Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 10:03 AM
Thanks for sharing kind words, Andrea.
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July 8, 2025 at 12:30 AM
If you should do a loop-de-loop - You may find that your thoughts regroup - It’s a good quick fix - And it does the trick - When brain fog is thicker than soup…… Beryl
Delegans Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Love it! Thanks for stopping by to read and comment, Beryl.
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