On a Loop or In a Loop?

Lost in a fog chasing a clue

This riddle’s got me feeling askew

My brain took a stroll then slipped

Now my logic’s completely flipped

Still nowhere near a clue

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Date: 7/8/2025 3:26:00 PM
I enjoyed this fine Limerick, Christopher. I'll be following your poetry now! A poet in Texas, Bill
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Christopher Delegans
Date: 7/12/2025 10:02:00 AM
Thanks, Bill. Limericks are fun and I definitely enjoy reading yours as well.
Date: 7/8/2025 2:32:00 PM
Aren't puzzles fun? This poem was enjoyable
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Christopher Delegans
Date: 7/12/2025 10:03:00 AM
The best and worst but always fun! lol
Date: 7/8/2025 1:06:00 PM
good rhyming word for your twist at the end. Nicely done
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Christopher Delegans
Date: 7/12/2025 10:03:00 AM
Thanks for sharing kind words, Andrea.
Date: 7/8/2025 12:30:00 AM
If you should do a loop-de-loop - You may find that your thoughts regroup - It’s a good quick fix - And it does the trick - When brain fog is thicker than soup…… Beryl
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Christopher Delegans
Date: 7/12/2025 10:04:00 AM
Love it! Thanks for stopping by to read and comment, Beryl.
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