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On a Loop or In a Loop?

Lost in a fog chasing a clue This riddle’s got me feeling askew My brain took a stroll then slipped Now my logic’s completely flipped Still nowhere near a clue

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/8/2025 3:26:00 PM

I enjoyed this fine Limerick, Christopher. I'll be following your poetry now! A poet in Texas, Bill

Christopher Delegans
Date: 7/12/2025 10:02:00 AM

Thanks, Bill. Limericks are fun and I definitely enjoy reading yours as well.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/8/2025 2:32:00 PM

Aren't puzzles fun? This poem was enjoyable

Christopher Delegans
Date: 7/12/2025 10:03:00 AM

The best and worst but always fun! lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2025 1:06:00 PM

good rhyming word for your twist at the end. Nicely done

Christopher Delegans
Date: 7/12/2025 10:03:00 AM

Thanks for sharing kind words, Andrea.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/8/2025 12:30:00 AM

If you should do a loop-de-loop - You may find that your thoughts regroup - It’s a good quick fix - And it does the trick - When brain fog is thicker than soup…… Beryl

Christopher Delegans
Date: 7/12/2025 10:04:00 AM

Love it! Thanks for stopping by to read and comment, Beryl.