On a Hot Spring Day

The sun gleams gold on the perennial clematis,
And bees hum low sucking honey from the lavenders.
A brisk breeze brushes the old sturdy sandalwood,
Accepting their delicate shade from spring sun.

The arch entrance exhales its jasmine perfume,
And lizards climb the stalks and hide in stone cracks.
How pleasant is the large ornamental garden
Where hidden crickets sound their constant song.

On such a day, my soul will find repose.
It seeks meditation as I sit beneath the oak.
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Sidlik Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 3:10 PM
Dear Viktor, Your poem gives me a wonderful feeling of beauty, gentleness and freedom. I am Marian Sidlik, a man from Slovakia, a new member of Poetrysoup. I admire the poems of the Maltese author Ruzar Briffa.
Singh Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 10:32 PM
A natural feeling in a beautiful garden on a hot spring day is very nicely portrayed in the poem
Brul Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 6:09 PM
Oh, the last two lines melts my heart. " On such a day, my soul will find repose. It seeks meditation as I sit beneath the oak." Captivating ending lines!!^___^
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 5:05 PM
such soothing words, especially the last line. Wishing you well!
Griffiths Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 10:19 AM
I really like the image of the arch exhaling perfume.
Empress Avatar
May 22, 2026 at 11:56 AM
So beautiful! Such vivid imagery dear Victor that awakens all senses of readers! Flows seamlessly and the way youv played around with words here is stunning too! Its always good to sometimes slow down and appreciate all! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always
Tor Avatar
May 22, 2026 at 6:18 AM
Oh what a lovely and serene place to be my friend. Your words have taken me there and I do not want to leave. I have missed your poetry my good friend and You as well. This one I am making a favorite.
Sands Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 4:36 AM
I enjoyed this peaceful poem . Beautiful details . Well done :)
Poet Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 4:11 AM
Your ability to capture the beauty and diversity of nature is truly remarkable. If we take the time to sit and be still in nature, we can find solace in its calming beauty.
Ball Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 12:30 AM
Beautiful Victor. Loving my back yard garden as I do I could feel myself there as I read your words. Well done my friend. God Bless, JB
Kitchin Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 6:38 PM
Victor, such a charming and peaceful poem.
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 11:15 AM
- Sounds like a wonderful spring, Victor :) - A joy to read :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 8:12 AM
There is a healing balm found in the beauty of nature, if only we stop for a moment to appreciate it. Give me a swing beneath a shade tree and that's where you'll find me.
George Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 11:14 PM
You are so brilliant in depicting nature in its wonderful variety and sweetness. You are equally well versed in composing romantic poetry. In the beauty of a garden and in serene surroundings, our soul can find repose.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 4:44 PM
This is lovely, so very beautiful and full of peace Victor. I have purchased but not planted the seeds for lavender in my garden, but my jasmine is so beautiful when it blooms, and makes the air perfumed with its blossoms. My husband and son have begun tilling the garden. I have been reluctant to use precious desert SW water on my garden for the last few years, but this year, we are to receive El Nino rain, I hope so. Your poem uplifts me! Enjoy much peace and joy in your sweet garden Victor :)
Rolland Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 4:40 PM
wonderful, may be you share meditation under this oak, thanks poet
Buehler Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 3:49 PM
So often has your poetry described perfect days, and places I'd love to visit! this poem is certainly no exception. It was delight for the senses! :)
Hind Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 12:39 PM
lovely- makes me want to go outside lol :)
Edmonds  Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 12:29 PM
A lovely way to spend a hot spring day Victor. Enjoyed the read, Beryl
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 11:56 AM
I like this one, Victor. You have described a beautiful garden somewhere if only in the mind's eye. Thank you for sharing this brief moment in time. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 10:05 AM
How lovely to be surrounded with sights and scents of Spring, so cathartic for the soul!
Rodgers Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 9:42 AM
Hello Victor, Ahhh a warm afternoon, the kind where the world moves slowly enough for the soul to catch up. I love the clematis glowing under that golden sun, the bees working their devotion, the sandalwood offering its shade like an old friend. I’m here, resting with you beneath that oak, letting the day do its gentle work. Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 9:23 AM
I loved reading "On a Hot Spring Day" write. I can see it all before me. Guess the hot days are coming. Have a lovely day writing away...............
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 7:58 AM
A beautiful poem on a golden day. Nice visiting you today, Victor.
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