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On a Greyhound Bus

I met her in the Greyhound station On a rainy New England day From different sides of desperation We were both trying to run away I needed to make a fresh, new start Where my troubled past was still unknown She was dying from a failing heart And from her hospital bed she had flown "I am only nineteen, but won't see twenty And don't want to die in a hospital bed The things I haven't done are equal to plenty And I'd like to live just a little instead" We talked We slept Not a secret was kept We laughed We cried There was nothing to hide Through cities Through towns With corn fields all around Over rivers Over hills Past landscapes with no thrills She said she had never made love with a man But knew that her heart couldn't take it I told her we've made love while crossing this land You don't have to have sex to make it Before we finally reached the west coast She smiled and told me good-bye She said, "This trip, I'll remember the most" And sometime that night she died I got off the bus in the middle of nowhere As they came to take her body away I took with me a lock of her hair And still have it with me today

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/23/2012 10:03:00 PM
joe,although I imagine this is fiction that you created, I REALLY like it . It's one of my favorites I've read tonight on this winners' list. Congrats.
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Date: 2/23/2012 9:43:00 AM
congrats Joe on an excellent win for deeply creative words luv..
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Date: 2/23/2012 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "(Any) Poem Of the week" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 5:00:00 AM
i really enjoyed this poem, especially the quick moving middle verses. the change in tempo really added something wonderful that i wouldn't have expected it to. great story, well-told!
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joe. This was a sad story that reminded me a bit of the movie "Midnight Cowboy".
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:36:00 PM
JOE.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/21/2012 2:19:00 PM
Wow Joe....what an great story and amazing write.
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:28:00 AM
Dear Joe - This gave me goosebumps. I could see the landscape flitting by and the bounce of the bus. "I told her we've made love while crossing this land You don't have to have sex to make it." Those lines are lovely. love, Kathy
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:59:00 PM
An amazing write. I enjoyed reading it. The only time I rode on a greyhound, I was 16, petrified, and sitting next to a burly guy with terrible b.o. Memorable, yes, but not in the same way. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/18/2012 4:37:00 PM
Emotive story told..Is this a true story or one that you wrote for us here at soup?..I am glad that I stopped by to read this one..Sara
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Date: 2/18/2012 1:33:00 PM
A very sad story, Joe. well written. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/18/2012 12:31:00 PM
An amazing poem and story. Thanks for a thought provoking read. - Chuck
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