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On a Crowded Bus

On a crowded bus I watch A tide of texting thumbs. No one young’s immune – It seems that everyone succumbs. Older folk read papers Or a magazine or book; Many simply close their eyes Or wear a vacant look. Younger people can’t survive Without their techno-tools. Losing them, I fear, would make them Flail like helpless fools. Somehow, in the days of old, Pre-smartphone, way back when, We occupied ourselves with books Or paper and a pen. Or, even better, we could sit And think or dream or muse; Trying to explain that now, I think, would just confuse. I once was taught that human thumbs Made us the better beast, But watching all those texters, All my admiration’s ceased.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/12/2013 6:18:00 AM
Great poem. Your poems are such gems. Love your last lines. Very witty. Great write.
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Date: 10/11/2013 7:31:00 PM
Don't look at me. Ok, your not. I think that you have just forgot. That there's someone else sitting right here. Why don't you take that phone out your ear. Or stick it in your ear. :):):) Peace. :)
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