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On a Bender

flaming red petals a yellow sunshine spreader bee attacks stamens with bottom-feeder passion his honey-business awake 10/5/2020

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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/7/2020 3:55:00 PM
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What lush(es)! Nicely penned Kim. Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2020 4:32:00 PM
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Thank you :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/6/2020 11:29:00 AM
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- Do not disturb their wonderful and sweet world ... love it, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2020 5:28:00 PM
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Thank you, Anne-Lise!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/5/2020 8:13:00 PM
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What a clever parody; I could not wait to read it and was happy I could!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2020 4:54:00 AM
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Thank you, Caren!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2020 5:46:00 PM
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You sure surprised me with this bee-auty, Kim. Upon reading the title, I was ready for an alcohol infused fender-bender. Thanks! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2020 6:33:00 PM
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LOL...you’re welcome!
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Kathy Anderson
Date: 10/5/2020 4:12:00 PM
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Bees evoke such interesting thoughts. I like your take on the life of a bee.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2020 5:20:00 PM
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Thank you, Kathy!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/5/2020 1:01:00 PM
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so cute and playful, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2020 5:27:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2020 5:21:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/5/2020 8:10:00 AM
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They work so hard and the end result is sublime, I love the stuff. Hope alls well Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2020 5:21:00 PM
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Thank you, Tom!
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Silent One
Date: 10/5/2020 7:02:00 AM
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His honey business awake lol.... Great tanka Kim.. Made me smile.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2020 5:28:00 PM
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Thank you, Silent! :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/5/2020 6:55:00 AM
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Honey, the best remedy. Loved your poem. ~~
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/5/2020 5:50:00 AM
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This magical world, nice!
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/5/2020 5:47:00 AM
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Words to flavor the morning so brilliantly and beautifully. Expressions of a gifted pen. Love and prayers sent your way, Gina
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