On a Bender

flaming red petals a yellow sunshine spreader bee attacks stamens with bottom-feeder passion his honey-business awake
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Fowler Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 3:55 PM
What lush(es)! Nicely penned Kim. Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:32 PM
Thank you :)
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 11:29 AM
- Do not disturb their wonderful and sweet world ... love it, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:13 PM
What a clever parody; I could not wait to read it and was happy I could!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 4:54 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Wolf Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:46 PM
You sure surprised me with this bee-auty, Kim. Upon reading the title, I was ready for an alcohol infused fender-bender. Thanks! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 6:33 PM
LOL...you’re welcome!
Anderson Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 4:12 PM
Bees evoke such interesting thoughts. I like your take on the life of a bee.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Thank you, Kathy!
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 1:01 PM
so cute and playful, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:27 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Cunningham Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:10 AM
They work so hard and the end result is sublime, I love the stuff. Hope alls well Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Thank you, Tom!
One Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 7:02 AM
His honey business awake lol.... Great tanka Kim.. Made me smile.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Honey, the best remedy. Loved your poem. ~~
Goff Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:50 AM
This magical world, nice!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Words to flavor the morning so brilliantly and beautifully. Expressions of a gifted pen. Love and prayers sent your way, Gina
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