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Omnipotent

Omen of hope divine Oasis of blessed calm Orchard of my plenty Obscure, yet almighty Obliged, I seek you out Obeisant, I kneel down Obeying your command April 5, 2021 Pleiades O Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman Six syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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Valsa George

Date: 2/22/2022 6:08:00 AM

As a Pleiades, this is a wonderful write ! you have compressed all the attributes of the Almighty in these limited lines ! Great job, Vijay !

Judy Ball

Date: 4/13/2021 1:00:00 PM

Wonderful write Vijay. No wonder it was a winner. Great job and a fave for me. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2021 2:21:00 PM

Congrats on this faith based winning work. Way to go. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/9/2021 12:28:00 PM

CONGRATS on your win with this deeply spiritual poem, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2021 5:34:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2021 3:05:00 PM

Back to congratulate you. You did the word justice!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2021 6:37:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/7/2021 2:06:00 PM

Vijay, congrats on your win in my contest with your reverent pleaides! Blessings, Kim M

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2021 6:36:00 AM

Thank you Kim.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/7/2021 11:11:00 AM

O how beautiful it is to see so many great lines beginning with O, :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2021 12:54:00 PM

Thank you, Vienna.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/7/2021 12:36:00 AM

Back with my congratulations on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2021 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Victor.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/6/2021 10:26:00 PM

Great write, Vijay, congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2021 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/6/2021 9:55:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a good evening, my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2021 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Alexis.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2021 3:25:00 PM

a very well written religious poem, Vijay! Great word choice.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2021 12:53:00 PM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Silent One

Date: 4/6/2021 1:32:00 PM

You did this form so well..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2021 12:53:00 PM

Thank you, SO--much appreciate.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/6/2021 8:54:00 AM

This is the most meaningful Pleiades I've seen for the contest, Vijay! A lovely reflection of your strong faith. Winning wishes for you and a fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2021 12:53:00 PM

Thank you my friend for your kind remarks. So special to receive a FAVE from you. Many thanks, Carolyn.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 4/6/2021 7:54:00 AM

Such a brilliant write... Really a great read... A winner for sure...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2021 12:52:00 PM

Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/6/2021 6:24:00 AM

This is excellent Vijay! You are a talented writer and your poetry is special :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2021 7:42:00 AM

That is really nice to hear. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks, Heidi.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/6/2021 5:07:00 AM

Owe inspiring, my dearest friend, Vijay! Good luck. Stay safe!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2021 5:52:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Demetrios.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/6/2021 2:29:00 AM

This is a inspiration that should be a winner in my book. I love love love it. God is good and your poem is a gift of love. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2021 5:51:00 AM

So nice to hear that from you. Much appreciate, Gina. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/5/2021 8:45:00 PM

"I seek you out" So many in the world need to. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your kind thoughts. Much appreciate, Brandy.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2021 1:13:00 PM

- Excellent, Vijay .... I have written some Pleiades and it is not easy at all ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2021 5:50:00 AM

So very kind of you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate -- many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/5/2021 1:04:00 PM

Well composed Vijay, reads like a prayer. Good luck Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2021 5:49:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Much appreciate, as always.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/5/2021 12:54:00 PM

Like a film, showing visions that touch the heart's emotions. o well composed and best for a win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2021 5:48:00 AM

Thank you Victor for your kind remarks. Much appreciate, as always.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/5/2021 12:53:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, You hit the ball out of the park with your well-written “ O” Pleiade. An excellent inspirational write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful, my friend:-)? Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2021 5:48:00 AM

Much appreciate Alexis. Many thanks my friend for your visit and comments.