Olive Garden Blues

A Pentecostal writer of songs Quit a waitress job she thought was wrong. At the bar, sings and plays ‘Bout her wild salad days. See, back then, she was speaking in tongs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 8:32 PM
Oy! Ah! No - oy! We'll submit this one to the old 'Gong Show' and see how it does. You're on right after 'The Unknown Comic!' Cheers, Gershon, Jamie Farr, J.P. Morgan, and the inimitable Chuck Barris
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Jeff, Funny, I really liked the wordplay "tong." Nice writing. Blessings ~ Debra
Lawless Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 5:23 AM
I'm with Milton.....sitting here laughing. Great bit of word play and humor
Kyser Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 2:23 PM
:-)
Hankins Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 7:30 PM
Oh, this is hilarious! (still laughing)
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