Olena Babak's artwork - Spring's Easel explodes Painting Shades

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Written: May 03, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand Olena Babak's artwork Spring's Easel Explodes Painting Shades ( It is more convenient to read the poem while looking at the artwork.) ******************* the light shines in the eye of the whirlwind whipping vanilla meringue through the clouds swinging, the swamp lawn shoots over the shore casting an apricot glow from the shrouds butterscotch hues lace the periwinkle sky peach, tangerine, and lavender stripes, too caramel waves ripple across the lakebed illuminating the lemon in the zircon view In lush glades on a cypress-lined isle pink flamingos find shelter by the trees blue herons weave twig nests in the boughs swaying in the warm, tropical-scented breeze as dusk draws the brightness down to the horizon Mother Earth downpours on the cornflowers nourishing buttercups, milkweed, and daisies while people describe the sprinklers as April showers

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Date: 5/6/2025 10:31:00 AM
SP, a very complete description and also a happy one. You do have a kind and generous way of doing things like this. Hope you are well, sir!!
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Date: 5/6/2025 12:55:00 AM
Back with congratulations dear poet on your top win in this contest with a superb poem painting in words of choice the artwork of a great artist. The poem is as delightful as the painting. Wish you a pleasant day filled with the blessings of sunshine.
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Date: 5/6/2025 12:28:00 AM
Sotto, A stunning tour de force of endowed imagery, apt colour usage and silken smooth between line passage. Environmental depiction especially impressive Congratulations on your selection Howard
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Date: 5/5/2025 11:50:00 AM
Lovely work, dear Sotto, rich images make this an even more beautiful work of art, using your eyes :)
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:21:00 PM
I loved this poem, and I love poems inspired by art!
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Date: 5/4/2025 4:43:00 AM
How beautiful and creative is your word weaving here dr sotto! Brilliant use of colors and how youv interpreted the art too is very vivid and descriptive! I love the art! Theres a dreaminess to it which can draw any reader to appreciate not just your poem but the artwork! I love also how youv written "pink flamingos find shelter by the trees blue herons weave twig nests in the boughs swaying in the warm, tropical-scented breeze" i could see through those words even without the art! Pleasure reading! Best wishes! Sending you light
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