Old-Fashioned Chauvinism

Relaxing on a lovely fatherland verdant, silky hills.
It overwhelms us and absorbs us with all its gravity.
You are so close to me; gap is shrinking, god wills. 
Luminous joy in this phantasmagoric love's audacity.

It overwhelms us and absorbs us with all its gravity.
Drift through our endless moods and touch our skin.
Luminous joy in this phantasmagoric love's audacity.
I inhale your lovely, cloying aroma and gulp it in.

Drift through our endless moods and touch our skin.
Our purest kismet bits, gyrating amid shimmering
I inhale your lovely, cloying aroma and gulp it in.
Astral raindrops poured down on our secretive ring.

Our purest kismet bits, gyrating amid shimmering
Cradled in your sempiternal devotion and love song
Astral raindrops poured down on our secretive ring.
I sense wisps of our kinship in a regal oasis throng.

Cradled in your sempiternal devotion and love song
Glistening in the brightness of the alabaster rays
I sense wisps of our kinship in a regal oasis throng.
related to the appearance of virescent future ways.

glistening in the brightness of the alabaster rays.
You are so close to me; gap is shrinking, god wills. 
related to the appearance of virescent future ways.
Relaxing on a lovely fatherland verdant, silky hills.

Written: February 10, 2023

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Valsa George

February 10, 2023 at 9:59 PM

You have created a heavenly ambiance and the romantic feelings flow like a torrent, making the hearts more and more close. Even the air is perfumed. The luminous joy you experience by the side of your sweet heart is so palpable. As ever, your pantoums are excellent.