Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

Older Not Smarter

My foot is asleep.
Left it up too long with a heavy dictionary on it.
Could hobble into the house.
Not yet!
Okay. 
In two minutes?
My body is screaming NOOOOOOO!
I do not listen.
Let’s make it three minutes, I suggest.
Knowing better in every fiber of my being.
But not caring.
I am getting older,
not smarter.
Stand up.
Collapse.
Break the other hip.
Dhramn!

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Panagiota Romios July 24, 2019 at 5:52 PM Keep moving as much as you can. You were joking about having a broken hip, right? Rather a broken hip than cancer, All is relative. Big mouth Panagiota Caren Krutsinger July 25, 2019 at 4:20 AM There is an old joke in my family "If you break a hip, it is just a matter of time, for you are as good as dead". I have not broken a hip, and if I do I will not tell any of the relatives for they will begin planning.

Arturo Michael July 24, 2019 at 8:32 AM Don't even mention hip breaking...but older not smarter... that where for many the ending is.... Caren Krutsinger July 25, 2019 at 4:20 AM That is true. You also have been warned I see. Maybe we are related.