Old Women

Old Women

Old women are forgotten wombs
whose graceless bodies have fed
the word, then been sent
to sit in its shadow
not quite seen, not acknowledged,
not nurtured

They are more patient than God

Old women are crucified
with nails of oppression and poverty
Equality is a Damoclean Sword
when age freckles out-number
soft, sweet patches of youth

Old women have scarred and bloody knees
from kneeling in submission to lesser minds
who felt bigger from the looking down

A rosary of sorrows is strung
through the weary fingers
of old women
They are hung on the crucifix of youth 
and beauty to wither into dust

Alone in cubicles and corners,
frayed photos beneath their coats
Old women remember children
who have long forgotten them

They do not seek a man’s arms,
for that is not a refuge, but a honeyed trap
where souls are flayed beyond recognition

Such wondrous minds
Living libraries of  life
Vision and experience left untouched
because it is not behind a pretty face

Behold the woman
She is a wealth of wisdom, power,
beauty and courage
yet she is left beside the road
of living

Her reckoning will come
Until then...she endures

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/17/2018 4:14:00 PM
Powerful truth is beautifully spilled from your golden pen unto the willing page, Sherry. A potent poem of importance and grace. A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan p.s. you totally had me st the first line; ‘Old women are forgotten wombs’ - what a way to start! So evocative!
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Date: 11/16/2018 11:05:00 PM
there's almost nothing more intriguing than an elder women...maybe cause i'm oldt
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Date: 11/16/2018 8:43:00 PM
Powerful and important piece Sherry. xomo
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Date: 11/16/2018 3:49:00 PM
Ah! Well-penned. My girlfriends and I always laugh and say "old women are invisible." But when we are all together, using code names, and being loud and boisterously silly, there is no way to ignore us. I used to avoid old women like the plague, but now that I am one of them....well, maybe you know, Sherry. Loved the part about the honeyed trap! LOVED IT!!!
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