Old Woman's Hands On a Grinding Stone

The coyote circles
he always circles
he shadows the path
of our existence
set by the pattern
of wind blown seeds

The old man sleeps
while his children 
play by the fire

He thinks he is 
still the slayer
of enemies
that are long gone

The crow waits
in a ragged nest 
for us
to move on 

My old heart
beats like this
grinding stone
it beats, it beats
and it beats
until it is still
like the dogs
in the afternoon

Sleep waits for me
like a white wolf
in the shadows
of that long line
of trees

Patient as water
he must wait for me
until I finish
my meal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/18/2016 8:56:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Date: 12/16/2015 11:42:00 AM
This is wonderful! I look forward to reading your next. This poem has the feel of the Native American's soul with hints of sadness of past glories. #7
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/18/2015 3:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie. I'm glad you glimpsed the Native American trace. Allowed for I am one-quarter Choctaw.
Date: 12/13/2015 2:38:00 PM
I like your circle of life very much. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/15/2015 10:31:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 12/12/2015 5:28:00 PM
Stunning imagery!
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/12/2015 7:26:00 PM
Thank you very much!
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